Ke Xue's Trainee Reaper

Kneel down in reality... A scream from the art gallery, and from then on the protagonist and the sissy are equated

Your characterization is not likable, especially the part where you sign the contract with Kogoro at the beginning. People in the fandom prefer protagonists with more distinct personalities.

Don't mind me telling you. I skipped through dozens of chapters and just glanced at one page. The plot is not attractive. Come on, I forgot why the last book was okay. The plot is basically similar to the original book and I have no desire to continue reading.

It's the gray heroine again. There are ten Conan books and eight of them. I really can't stand it anymore 😭

The way the protagonist is portrayed... I've seen dozens of them and still can't figure out why the protagonist has to go to Maori to work for free without food or shelter. I can't stand it anymore...

The writing in the last book was a bit dull, so let's check out the new book to see if it feels better.

Ah, you have been raising it until it is on the shelves?

The plot settings are a bit deliberate and unreliable in some places, just to forcefully follow the plot. Some people's settings are a bit broken.

Does the author have an outline this time? The plot is too fast. The protagonist has surpassed Kyogoku in only 550,000 words. There is too little room for the growth of the protagonist in the future. It may be that the author has not read much about Conan and Magic Kaito, and lacks descriptions of daily life and ordinary cases. The main plot advances too fast and is often unfinished. I suggest the author read more of the original work and thoroughly understand the character settings before starting to create. The characteristics of the author's big book are He is rich in imagination and has a good grasp of the plot memory. The shortcoming lies in his understanding of the plot and characters. The characters in Conan are constantly growing, and growth is indispensable for some necessary experiences. The author has changed some plots, but the changes in the characters' mentality are not obvious, which makes the author's book lack some highlights. However, I support the author's book and hope that the author can create better things. 👍

Author, how long will it take for Xiao Ai to appear?

Daily life is too difficult to write about. The characters and locations in Conan are not fleshed out enough. The original work is all about a case. After reading about twenty chapters, the case went by too fast. In fact, it is not recommended to write these big plots together. In the middle, add some daily life to Xiaolan and her parents. You can even write a sister. If you write a fanfic just for the sake of making candy, not many people will read it. After all, Conan fans will get tired if you don't change your aesthetic after watching too many of these big plots. It is still recommended to put more thought into it, otherwise it will be like the last book and there will be nothing to write in the end except to make candy. What do you say about the golden finger? It is recommended to strengthen it a little more. Strengthening the body is not only physical strength, but also mental agility and nerve reaction speed. Moreover, the likes and dislikes of the soul are indicated by the shade of red, and the rewards obtained are also somewhat enhanced. You can write about things and descriptions other than the original plot of Conan, and look for side cases and detective novels, such as the BMW Lottery in Xi'an back then. You can definitely use this to adapt it. The boss asked me and finally changed the jumping off the building into a vendetta. Then, with the background, I went to the detective novel to find more fancy techniques, and a plot came out. Of course, it is RB after all, and I, the Great China, finally found out the truth. Possessed by the European Emperor can be directly directed to hhh or it can be further processed on the original plot. Nowadays, if you don't modify the Conan fandom, it feels like you're skipping chapters Come on

The case is not good, and the plot development is not good either.

If you want to make money, you can't make it like this.

Why are there no updates today

Have you watched "Douluo: I Kill the Red Dust for Xiaowu"?

Author, can you write a Conan book with more than one million words? There are two books and none of them are available.

After reading eight chapters, I don't know what the pig's feet are for.

I'm writing a few extras, author, and will the next book be Conan?