The Domineering Spirit of Time Travel Protects the Shortcomings and Kills Indiscriminately

Book review time: Chapter 57 of the series; Book review chapters: All chapters have been updated at the time of book review; Book review text: Personally, I felt that the description related to time travel at the beginning of the article was a bit unclear, at least I didn't understand what was going on the first time. The author of the following article is obviously deliberately creating contradictions. It seems to be a more traditional slap in the face. How should I put it, the effect is not particularly good, and the pleasure of being slapped in the face is not very strong. The early works still gave me a very bland feeling. It wasn't until the animal protection center discovered the problem that there was a strong suspense. But after Dong Yu's accident, the article suddenly turned to a small climax, and the tension and anticipation suddenly rose. However, what surprised me was that the author suddenly pulled the camera back to the school and cut off the climax. Generally speaking, there are two types of situations. One is that the author did not control and make good use of this climax, so he stopped it. The other is that the author deliberately left suspense and created more other suspense and foreshadowing to prepare for a more intense climax. I don't know which situation the author belongs to.  Then what deeply affected me was the sudden mental disorder of the protagonist, which created a strong suspense for the novel and also gave the novel a bit of fantasy color, which made me unconsciously start to fantasize about the fantasy plot. There is also the sinister smile of "Doctor Li", the sudden return of "Grandma"'s son, and the story behind "Grandma" and "Son" all add a lot of suspense and even a sense of mystery. But I feel that the return of this "grandma's" son is a bit abrupt, and "Xiao Chu"'s confession to his parents and sister is a bit too sudden, and it doesn't feel very smooth and reasonable. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is not very smooth. It affects reading, emotional expression, and the enhanced sense of immersion, making some plot emotional expressions not very good, and even a little embarrassing. The most obvious one is the pretentious and slap-in-the-face section. Part of the reason for the lack of expressiveness is due to the influence of the writing style. The author's suspense preparation is good, and the protagonist is well portrayed, but I feel that there are too many characters, and the description is not deep, and there is no particularly deep impression. If it is just a simple cool story about pretending to be cool, but this book is obviously not a simple cool story about pretending to be cool, it doesn't feel particularly good. Regarding the plot of the animal protection center, I can see that the author is a very caring person. When it comes to animal protection, I will talk about something that has nothing to do with the work. In reality, there are people who use animal protection to make shady money. At the "Dog Meat Festival" in some places, people often stop the cars transporting dogs to be slaughtered, and a large number of homeless dogs are rescued at one time. , They use this method to generate publicity, and then use the publicity to make people pay attention to the animal protection organization behind them, and let everyone donate money to the so-called animal protection organization, and the donated money is often used by people themselves instead of using it for the animals they take in. I hope everyone can open their eyes in the future and never let their love be used. (Book reviews are highly subjective and represent only personal opinions. Please consider carefully before making a decision whether to adopt it or not.)

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Thank you for coming to support me so quickly, Pangpang, Hezizi, Zichong, Awan❤️ Actually, I am not good at beginnings, so you can point out any shortcomings after reading it. Recently, I have time to revise it in large parts. I also want to make a good start. If the number of words increases in the future, it will be too late. Speaking of which, I would like to thank the box for the suggestion 🌹 which is very useful.

About the future of this book: It will be completed; Under normal circumstances, it will be updated once a day; If nothing unexpected happens during the holidays, I will prepare a new book and plan to publish it after it is approved by internal investment, but this book will not stop updating; Use this book for entertainment, record some inspiration, and write it yourself What I want to write; Not for results, not for signing a contract; I will write about a lot of people I know, and you can see that many characters have already appeared; Just treat it as a free benefit, and I think it is not an ugly novel, haha; Thank you for your support. ❤️

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Before I knew it, I had opened a new book.

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Half a pound of soy sauce beef, a pound of Laobaigan, I smiled wildly at the sky. After reading hundreds of online articles, my writing skills have long since become old, and I want to leave a story that is both sun and night. Bring a pot of turbid wine and taste a pot of good tea, and there will be no regrets in life. I wonder how many readers are obsessed with online articles. Looking at the current situation and writing about it, I can do it too.

The exam should be over. How is the volatilization swollen?

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The book will be finished this month. Entertainment is entertainment after all. Thank you for your support. I will speed up the pace in the next few days. The ending may not be the original intention, but it will be.

Have a nice weekend🙂

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