A Chat Group Started by Teenage Hackers

Personally, I think it is very good. It has a good grasp of daily life and battles. The content and characters are also well drawn. Even the enemies are well drawn. The system is also very reasonable. It can be said to be a relatively perfect fan novel. (These are my true thoughts after reading this, not a lie. I hope the author can grasp it well. If not, you can read what was written before. In short, it is relatively perfect. Finally, can the author add some refinements 😄)

The system is self-aware, which may be a bit toxic to me and some people, so let me say this in advance for those who haven't seen it.

The God of Total Evolution and the first generation of Young Hackers, I don't want to watch anymore after watching the first two or three seasons of The Mighty Show. How can I put it, The Mighty Show is very childish.

I hope this author will not stop updating, because there are too few novels about young hackers.

I suddenly remembered that I had seen a full-color portrait of Xiaoban and Xiaowen😅😅

This is my previous comment. Basically, I will post it whenever I see a good BEN10 fan.

I think the most basic bottom line when writing fan fiction is not to touch the protagonist. You can move the rest as you like.

Human high-quality small classes

I don't know how many people have been persuaded to quit by this system.

To be honest, author, if you just write Ben10, you may get better grades than you do now.

"Young Hackers: Alien Heroes" version of Xiaoban

When I saw the title of the book, I really thought he was a hacker. When I saw the content, I was confused.

"Young Hackers" version of small class

Who came up with this thing called the Ten Thousand Realms Chat Group? Don't you really feel embarrassed? So weird. . . .

Show it to you

To be honest, the fighting is a bit sloppy, and the characters are not well drawn. Fortunately, it is a fanfic, which is convenient. A few scenes passed by, and the pace was too fast. It was over as soon as a goal was set. The only expectation for the subsequent plot is the plot itself. I am curious about how to deal with the extra watches. I can design a few plots here, whether it is a slight leak of secrets, or whatever. It's really puzzling for the author to use a secret as a reason and just brush it off in less than a hundred words.

Teenage hacker! ! ! ! ! !

If you have any super beast weapons, get one too. I feel like what Pluto said makes sense, or Xuan Yizi can do it too.

This novel is written as if the protagonist is not traveling through time, but more like watching a movie. He is somewhat involved in the plot, but basically nothing has changed. The same goes for people in other worlds. They have spoiled the script, but basically nothing has changed. ——The above are my thoughts after reading the first 20 chapters. I have no desire to read any more.

By the way, what is the protagonist's ban10 ability? (I haven't watched it yet) By the way, will there be Danny Phantom and Go Midi?

This article is really well written. It is purely for those who are new to this type of novels in junior high school. And have you read ben10?

Seeing the young hacker click in directly.

There are really few people who can write ben10

Finished spreading flowers🌹🌹 When you see an investment reminder, come and take a look.

The writing style is relatively immature, and there is almost no specific description of the early battles. The characters lack psychological description, and it is difficult to create a more three-dimensional image. The characters are relatively stiff, and the combat power is too chaotic. The level setting can basically be ignored. It is no longer a question of whether the combat power can collapse. The plot is too jumpy, making it completely unclear where to write. However, as far as the setting is concerned, it is quite thoughtful, but unfortunately the author did not show it well. However, there are too few people writing on the subject of ben10. If you can tolerate the above shortcomings, you can still read it. I hope the author can work hard in future books. |･ω･｀)

After reading a few of them, I feel like the author is a new writer. There is no foreshadowing or emphasis, and almost no description of characters or scenes. It's hard to feel involved.

I'm so sorry to all of you, this book has a Japanese system

It's dry, like a piece of instant noodles. Try to improve your writing style.

Do you want to write the second part?

Please recommend ben10 fan fiction, there are too few starting points.