Starting with Fatal Black Orchid

It's really just for the sake of the plot. The protagonist talks about various dangers and shouldn't rely on them. The author uses all kinds of blunt excuses to lure the protagonist into the plot. It's not a task issued by the system. Participating in the plot will do you no good. Why should you participate in dangers? Isn't it because you are the protagonist and can't die?

Go back and finish updating Transformers, quickly! 🙂

1. There is too much nonsense in the first chapter. If you have traveled through time, don't bother writing about scenes from your past life. Readers don't care. 2. Chinese people... Chinese people have no problem, but this is a European and American movie. Why don't you give the protagonist a European and American name? A semi-European and American name is also fine, (Mark Lee), just like the protagonist in ancient Chinese novels is named (John F. Kennedy)? ? ? Why use European and American names? They are all European and American names. It's so awkward that you only have a Chinese name. I really don't understand what everyone who writes American dramas is afraid of now. In fact, it's best to be fair-skinned when writing about foreign time travel. If not, then mixed-race, and then Chinese-American. You have traveled to the United States to become third- and fourth-generation immigrants. You are already an American. Why do you care about your skin? ❤️[As long as the protagonist travels through the past and his heart is red, he will always be a Chinese dragon]👍. Excessively highlighting the Chinese identity will only be a loophole. 3. The golden finger is too long... And it appears very abruptly, and the writing style does not match it. Why don't you use a farming system for your gun battle story? I haven't read a few chapters... You have brought out all my poisonous spots...

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away, forget about the few updates, and it's still out of stock! ? It's been so long since I've been completing an eight-legged monster dungeon mission, and I've been looking forward to it for nothing.

In Vengeance, the protagonist is ready to fight a gangster for 30,000 US dollars. What are you after? Are you after his chick body? Or is it just to add to the plot? The income is not directly proportional to the danger. I don't understand where your brain is.

Stop writing and find a job in a factory.

Why do you keep recommending such a bad book to me? ! It is recommended that Qidian add a "blacklist" function, sorry!

The roots suddenly started to cut off three months ago. What happened to the author?

This book has serious logic bugs. The protagonist Goldfinger is a space farm. There is no benefit in participating in the plot. Normal people should avoid horror monster movie plots when they see them. It's not like you can level up by killing monsters. The logic bug is too serious.

The conflict between the three views of the character's personality is too serious. It's impossible to attract readers by trying to climb the wall on both sides. Either he takes the route of a bad good guy who wants to take revenge, or the hero is more selfish. He wants to be a good guy at one moment, but seems cold and unkind at the other moment, and loves money and sex but even black orchid. Don't do it either. One moment, he even said he didn't like the person he wanted to stay when he came to adulthood. There was no stable personality at all. In addition, he was confused about how to deal with the social network of the original person after the time travel. One moment he was afraid of trouble, and the next moment he would stick to the past. He didn't know which personality was the main character.