
I Just Can Make It
我就是能投进
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 768k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Basketball
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The coach gives you a training plan, and the protagonist suddenly says that he has his own ideas, and then what? Inexplicably, I went to play street ball, and it was a normal training match. Where is your own training plan reflected?
When the system rewards something, just write it is for Irving. Don't add a gift at the end, or just give the system to Irving. The author likes Irving so much.
Some suggestions for the author 1. It's too depressing. You can have malicious fouls, criticisms, etc., But don't do it all the time 2. It's best not to have too much emotional scenes, because this is a basketball article, not an urban article. 3. Wrong writing of data, this is absolutely not allowed, otherwise the readers will never read it. Regarding Abandoned Books 4. You must have a good grasp of the time when you first enter the league, otherwise the author must be strong enough in writing, otherwise it will be easy to fail 5. It is recommended to check more information 6. For basketball articles, trading and the draft are really important. This is one of the most attractive plots in my opinion. , I hope the author can plan well 7. Don't have such things as star experience cards, it's really poisonous 8. Skills like fantasy steps, fadeaway jumpers, etc., Don't write them as King of Glory skills, with skill cooldowns, etc., Because these actions It's not an action that requires the help of the system, so if there is a cooldown, it will become a poisonous point That's it for now, I will add more when I think of it I hope the author can write a longer 20 seasons Don't ask me what's going on with the layout, I don't know! ! !
It's all because of the author's self-pleasure, in the second half, the score is 13 to 14, and the protagonist's three assists are very poor?
The book is very confusing. Before the pig's foot character is established, there are a bunch of plots with no meaning, such as Chapter 1213, which is neither interesting nor meaningful. It also seems that the book is very messy. Nowadays, basketball articles generally stabilize the protagonist's character first, show the pig's foot character in the relationship with the team, do a few oil rewrites, and then use the rest of the basketball part differently.,,, The story of a hero saving a beauty ten years ago makes me vomit.
After reading the first chapter, you will know that you are a newbie 😒
The writing is too messy and the shortcomings of the routine are too obvious. Players with less than 60 attributes can be used as 80 players. It is estimated that 80 players will be able to play super giants in the future. I really like this kind of operation.
Your writing is a bit messy, and the logic and plot are a bit simple, and your writing style is not good at ridicule.
What are you doing? The previous chapter is still a decisive victory, but the next chapter will directly fail? Who are you trying to fool?
Brother, your salary must be taxed. 😭You are just a layman
Come on
I really can't help but reward him with a hundred points to make fun of him. . You have a 193cm big guy and you have a 157cm heroine. . . . Is it to satisfy your personal hobbies?
If the protagonist is traded to the Lakers, then it can only be goodbye. No one is a fool to trade a star with an immeasurable future for an All-Star who has already seen results.
In fact, there are many girls who study abroad who are very beautiful. I really want foreigners to find someone who is really good-looking.