The Soldiers from the Underworld Sign into the Book of Life and Death at the Beginning

Magical brain circuits, even if ghosts have bodies, they still need to eat to survive. It is funny that they should eat food from the mortal world. Even if the world view needs to be reset, it should be food from the underworld.

It's too slow. Write faster.

The writing is quite good, but it feels a bit awkward. The way of heaven has been destroyed, and all the gods and Buddhas in the sky are gone. Why are all the demons and ghosts suppressed by the underworld okay? The realm is still so high. And why would a random villain be a true immortal or a golden immortal? Isn't it said that the destruction of true immortals by the way of heaven is the pinnacle? How come there are still existences above Taiyi?

{"NickName":"Chi Ningyu","UserId":312935563} There is something wrong with the realm in this book. For example, the Golden Immortal realm should be above the True Immortal realm, right? You directly gave me a person who is below the True Immortal realm. You are a damn talent.

This guy Lao Chi has been working hard to write books, but this guy has too many frameworks in his head. He always wants to be perfect and doesn't know how to compete for popularity with the mainstream or cater to readers. I hope there will be changes this time, buddy, I will always support you ✊

Gone, poisoned in Chapter 5. Forced foreshadowing. Just hilarious. The author is rubbing the reader's intelligence on the ground.

The author opened my eyes. The author is not from Earth.

A ghost soldier practices the Nine Transformations Mysterious Skill. Isn't the Nine Transformations Mysterious Skills a physical body cultivation technique? Do ghosts also have physical bodies? Can't understand

I, Shennong, have tasted this book and found it extremely poisonous.

The author's understanding of the underworld comes entirely from ancient novels, and the whole book is a hodgepodge.

After reading the introduction, I was a little confused. Aren't Yin soldiers disembodied? So how did he practice the Nine Transformations Mysterious Technique?

The character of the protagonist collapses. I have read more than 50 chapters. In the first few chapters, I still thought that he was a powerful immortal. Later, there were female characters and the male protagonist's IQ plummeted. You are the best character in Liaozhai. He is not stubborn and has no aura of great immortal. After that, the more I read, the more I think the protagonist is. Suppose the latitude seems to be declining, and then I feel that the protagonist is just a dog of the system, and there are always people controlling the protagonist. I am too tired of this kind of life where the protagonist is the flag. As for the small world that the protagonist has cultivated, the transition is gone. Just drive low, I'm sorry that I can't watch it anymore. Goodbye.

Em... How should I put it, you can either create a new framework, background and various settings as you like, or follow the common sense of most readers.

I stopped reading when I saw the second chapter. What kind of setting is Yin soldiers training. Not to mention the physical body, the entity has not practiced any sub-body.

The way of heaven is gone! Where does the merit come from? ? ?

High emotional intelligence, this book would have been popular two or three years ago

After reading various comments from many people, some people actually said that I am a waste of money. Please forgive me for laughing unkindly😄Novel is a thing for everyone to watch. Whether you like the novel or the author, you can read it if you want to read it. If you don't want to read it, just criticize it. Don't shoot at me, I'm a serious reader 🤭 Just like Lao Chi, he's almost dying of poverty even if he gives him bad money 😁 But this book, the more you read, the more you will understand how big this game of chess is. There may be some things that you think are unreasonable, but others think are reasonable, and things that others think are reasonable, you think are unreasonable. The benevolent sees benevolence, the wise see wisdom, just watch the excitement, don't take it seriously.

The golden immortal couldn't beat the real immortal, and the ghost actually wanted to eat mortal rice.

It's very mediocre, I feel like the starting reward is too high, the upgrade is too fast, and I haven't seen the human plot yet, so I'll keep it for now.

What do dead people eat? Do you still want to get rice from the earth? 😅😅😅What settings

Is the author the vest of a pure beast of an ancient god? The first novel I read that year was "Online Games: The Wind and Dust of Jianghu", which started my journey of writing online.

Yan Chixia, the tree demon's grandma, didn't become an immortal. Why did she become an immortal here?

How did those Wu Clan die? Not to mention the decline of heaven and man, the Wu Clan can have a soul,

Too much nonsense, my personality really doesn't like it

I don't know what the author wants to express about the protagonist. He practices and upgrades in a low-key manner, has no story line, and is boring. The protagonist has character flaws and no ambition. He just wants to practice in a low-key manner. With this arrangement, he can cultivate to invincibility by writing only one chapter. There is no need for so many chapters, and the book can be completed long ago.

{"NickName":"Chi Ningyu","UserId":312935563} There is an old book called "Darkness in Another World". The main character is Chi Ningyu. It is well written and looks like a hardcore gamer.

Generally speaking, if you start with a ghost, you have to do the Nine Transformations Mysterious Technique. Many readers will not be able to accept ghost cultivation. . .

Even if you become a ghost and still practice physical training, do ghosts have meridians?

Heaven's Way Collapses, I am Chen Ping'an~,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Seeing that no one said anything good in the whole article, I felt relieved and stopped criticizing me. Author, please work hard, you still have a long way to go.