Fengshen: King Zhou Became My Apprentice at the Beginning

The protagonist is like a stallion when he has a harem. The people who intercept and teach are all unruly people and loyal people. I don't see the pride of the people who intercept and teach. Are all the women who intercept and teach so easily fallen for the protagonist? So what? Moreover, it can be seen in the Battle of the Gods that none of the women in the Jiejiao betrayed the Jiejiao, how could they do it for the protagonist? Sharing it with other women for the sake of a man makes me want to see it all, and the protagonists have become immortals, so they have all the moods they should have! Although the fairies in the same sect are all beautiful, they don't have to fall in love with each one they see. It makes me so sick. Or is this book just for the author's own entertainment?

The more I look at it, the more ridiculous it becomes. For a person who has become an immortal, his state of mind is still not up to par, but when he sees a woman's body, he has to look at it. It's really too weird.

The writing is very good, and the ideas are very interesting, but one thing is, can the author not repeatedly mention the plot that has already been written? For example, how many times has the scene where Yun Zhongzi pretended to be Tianshu and was punished by God to die appeared? For another example, King Zhou lamented that his master treated him as if he were his own child. I saw this happened twice in Chapter 55. There are too many repetitive paragraphs, which gives people the feeling of being tautological with too few words.

Hungry ghost in lust! The plot is not well written, all I do is talk nonsense and take advantage. I am afraid that even Nuwa will be taken down by you in the future, and I won't be able to watch it anymore.

Every time a character appears or has a conversation, you always describe the clothes and appearance repeatedly. Do you copy and paste the word count?

It's still quite interesting. Nice idea. Quite a lot of fun. I can't read it too closely, but the writing is good. Worth a look.

You fall in love with anyone you see. Are you a child that no one wants? If you just read it as a mindless cool article, you won't be able to use any brain while reading it.

In the first chapter, the protagonist said that even if Di Xin becomes a saint, you don't have to kneel down. Is this funny?

It's all duplicated, like copied and pasted

I've read dozens of chapters and it's too boring. I keep repeating it.

Ouyang Feng: I make a sneak attack Prince Duan: I counterattack

Is it another little vest of King Zhou?

It's not like I'm going to grow eyes on my forearms again. I laughed so hard last time.

Most of the content has a kind of sluggish sentences, and the content always seems to be sluggish!