Nongmen's Lady's Farming Notes

I would like to give the author a few suggestions and comments: First of all, if the character is a neighbor who has no extra food after paying the grain, it is impossible to afford meat. They would rather plant all the land with grain, or full pumpkins, etc., And it would be difficult to convince themselves to grow large-leaf green vegetables in the yard, which are not full, take up time and take up space, let alone just pick something to eat. If someone cooks meat no matter how big or small it is occasionally, there will definitely be people watching, especially people who come to borrow food. It's about thinking the best of all your neighbors. Secondly. The aroma of cooked instant noodles is very fragrant to the noses of people who don't have enough to eat all year round! In the dead of night, the hunger increases and becomes more obvious! Who would open fire in the middle of the night? Rich man! How can someone who can't even smell the smell of fine grains endure the aroma of instant noodles? So it's impossible for no one to suspect it. Last but not least, even if someone got sick among the poor people in ancient times, it was impossible for meat to appear. Please make some bone soup! What's more, it's under tyranny! Under tyranny, do you still dare to shout loudly about meat? So there is something wrong with this setting. In addition, if the yard is large, there may be a well, but in ancient times, only middle-class families could afford to build wells, and the rest were either forced to buy water or carry water. Which kind are they? Siheyuan? And a patio? So why should a 12-year-old, semi-adult child live in the same room with a child of the opposite sex? The author was born in a happy era, but if he wants to write ancient literature, he must know what real shortage of food and clothing, tyranny and heavy taxes are. You can read articles from the 1950s and 1960s. Only by truly understanding the hardships experienced at that time can we understand and write truly good articles. Come on, girl!

The content is not bad, but the words are too verbose, and it feels like the wheels are going back and forth.

I like this article. My family is warm and loving, my kind grandma, my honest and open-minded parents, my cold-faced and warm-hearted brother, and my cute little sister. I like them all. Cheers ✊

Phew, who would name a serious person Xue'er? As soon as they met, they said her grandma's name is Jiang Xue'er, her mother's name is Lin Yan, and all the girls in the family are from brothels.

The last sentence of the introduction is fascinating, but I just don't like it.

The flow of literature is long-winded throughout, and the starting point is getting lower and lower.

My clothes are clean now, so it's hard to write about. I look forward to the follow-up! 💐

The running account is just eating, sleeping and eating every day

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