Da Qin Saved Qin Shihuang at the Beginning

This book is so awesome, it treats the emperor of the ages like a fool 🤭🤭 In the first chapter, you tell King Qin that you have to lower your prestige and be kind to everyone. If you do this, Qin will die faster.

I guess there are many people who can't stand it. They don't know how to divide it into paragraphs. There are too many words in one paragraph and they make them dizzy as soon as they take a glance at it, let alone read it carefully. This really needs to be changed, otherwise fewer and fewer people will read it.

Water, there are too many introductions, and they are introduced in long paragraphs, which makes me tired.

😅Plot and writing. If you are above the passing line, you can take a look if you have nothing to do. Problem, too few segments. At a glance, everything is filled with words, which is not friendly to the eyes and can easily cause fatigue...

Extremely poisonous, the poison has been tested. Strength persuades them to retreat. What are you writing about?

I slipped away first. This paragraph made me numb. In addition, there were too many typos and many sentences were not fluent. The slight obsessive-compulsive disorder was indeed a bit unbearable.

What rubbish is written, so many typos

Write a novel for the first time! My eyes are blurred

I'm afraid I'm going to die from pig's feet in a hundred acres of rice fields. If I don't do anything every day, I just plant rice seedlings. The land has to be plowed and watered. I'm afraid I'm going to die from pig's feet.

This was written by a primary school student, right?

This book. . . Speechless, it's stolen, it's just that the main character's name has been changed. Except for the main character's name, everything else is exactly the same. I checked online and there are already 8 or 900 chapters.

I can't stand it anymore, there are too many typos and the sentences don't make sense. The sentence is incorrect

There are too many typos and the mistakes are too outrageous!

😅There are too many typos and I am tired of reading them.

They are all typos, could you please be more serious? It sucks to watch this. Not segmented yet

The verbosity and procrastination made me feel embarrassed! Bad review, give it a try 😰😰😰

If you skip one or two typos, the article can be read smoothly. But when the typos are connected together, it becomes difficult to read!

It's not that I looked at it for a while and felt there were a lot of typos. What the hell?

There are so many typos that I have no desire to read anymore.

I have been reading this book for five or six years. For the first time, I couldn't read it because of the paragraphs and typos.