Awakening from the Sky

I saw a person walking in front of me, covered in mist, with a slim figure and alluring charms in his hands. The crowd was in turmoil, and someone carefully spread the word that this was the current Yaochi Saint. Someone had seen her take action against an ancient exotic bird, but the golden beast bloodline was suppressed by this woman after three hundred rounds of fierce fighting 🤓 So what Xiongtai means is...

Who doesn't want to travel through the sky, punch the genius, beat the dark supreme, step on the ruthless person, and be Ye Fan's big brother?

The protagonist does not need to catch up with Ye Hei, just be a secondary supreme, such as a great sage or a quasi-emperor. In the Zhetian fanfic, there are so many characters where the protagonist is invincible and can even defeat Ye Fan and even cross Ye Hei's chance. I almost vomited when I saw it. The Supreme Emperor who covers the sky is considered to be of the highest rank, but after killing Himeko, his popularity collapsed, and then he became a eunuch. According to Chen Dong's settings and the description of Shi Hao and Ye Fan, it is normal for such a genius to succeed. However, the protagonists written by novice authors are too strong and far from the talent, understanding and shocking creativity of the peerless genius, and novice authors simply do not have the writing power to control them. As stunning as Shi Hao and Ye Fan, they have suffered major setbacks and even died. In Zhetian, those who can become a great sage will not be able to win. In the universe, they are respected as beings in a certain domain, and are respected as the ancestors of the religion. They can pass down complete ancient scriptures of cultivation and even handed down holy weapons. Since ancient times, great sages are not ordinary people. There is no simple one who can become a great sage. He stumbles along the way, such as Taoist Qinghuang.

The main character's weapon is a coffin. I don't want to see it. There is nothing wrong with building a coffin. In the later stage of building a bell, the imperial bell above your head suppresses endless time and space, earth, fire and feng shui. When building a tower, just build a world with thirty-three floors. Isn't it awesome? Cauldrons, swords, and pictures are all fine, just like the Tai Chi God and Demon Diagram of the God's Tomb.

Since ancient times, the great sage has no ordinary people, and the descendants of the great sage's bloodline are also very powerful. Before Ye Fan encountered the Overlord on the Starry Sky Ancient Road, he had been fighting against the Great Sage.

The writing is actually quite good, and there is no need to compete with the protagonist for opportunities. After all, he has a ruthless sister behind his back, so it's okay to rub him in every once in a while. As the saying goes, a gentleman strives for self-improvement, fights for his own opportunities, and leaves his destiny to his own will. This is the strength and confidence of the strong. I like this book.

Look at the pig🐷foot and learn so many tomb robbing notes, it feels like forming a golden trio with Duan De Black Dog🐶 to dig the graves of other people's families.

I have to say that it was good at the beginning, but after encountering Qi Huoshui, the taste changed! A man who aspires to be an emperor is actually bullied and jealous by two women. It's extremely poisonous!

Time travel and amnesia... Then you can use a hammer to travel through time, isn't it better to just be aboriginal...

Those of you who write fan fiction are really trying new ways to poison yourself. Even serious and original writing about amnesia has to be thrown into the street, let alone fan fiction.

The character of the protagonist is completely unpredictable, and I think it can be summed up by a common saying in reality: second-rate. He didn't say anything the whole time, and he didn't look like a practitioner at all.

I lost the desire to read the amnesia article after reading the introduction.

Can't you just write about the aborigines if you have amnesia? Also, most of Ye Fan's opportunities were not left by ruthless people. If you want to be strong in the future, just grab them! Do you want to be a licking dog? Amnesia is a poisonous point, and you are licking Ye Fan. As long as you don't steal the things left by ruthless people like the Mother Qi Root of All Things, you can grab it when you have another opportunity. Anyway, Ye Fan is the one who protects the emperor, and the protagonist thinks that he can live a good life by licking Ye Fan. It is better to rely on others than on yourself.

Today is 520. Dear readers, can you love me again?

Zhetian fanfics directly write dog-licking novels, because 99% of fan readers are dog-licking novels. For example, the book "Zhetian: Days of Future Past" is a complete dog-licking novel, and "I am cultivating eternal life in Zhetian" is also a dog-licking novel These two books are the best among fandoms. It's a pity that the Emperor's book About the Emperor's murder of Ji Zi, it reflects the bad nature of people.

Why did the writing turn into an urban bloody romance? If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, then don't write them.

I have lost my memory. Isn't it good to write about indigenous people? Traveling through amnesia is really poisonous and shitty

I feel that the protagonist is a bit like an unqualified bumpkin. Like a spirited young man, he either interrupts others or slanders them in a low voice.

This book left me feeling severely divided. Duan De, who is in the Taoist palace, is actually shouting that he is tired. Author, please don't put the ghost blowing the lamp in his place! Fatty Wang is an ordinary person, and Duan De is a monk. The feeling of fragmentation is so severe!

After reading the introduction, I have no expectations to continue reading. Losing memory means that the sense of immersion is greatly reduced.

After reading ten chapters, there are a lot of typos... But the student party is written like this, which is not bad Come on, author

Because I am still studying, updating once a day is the limit.

Three Worlds in Coffin Town Three Worlds, Past, Present, and Future Finally buried himself

The time traveler is awesome, but it's a waste of air if he doesn't die.

Many of the protagonists in Starting Point are unlikable now.