I Am Still Too Weak to Travel Through Douluo

I have finished reading it and it is very well written, especially the dialogues, but there are too many Invincible stories now. The one I wanted to write is not intended to be an Invincible story. There is basically no description of the environment. Unless you have a deep memory of the original work, it will give people the feeling of an assembly line.

Brother, when you write a book, describe the place when you reach it, and try to use some facial expressions when talking to the characters. For example, when the protagonist is about to leave the Qibao Glazed Sect, Ning Fengzhi should at least have a frown on his face. When you get to the Rose Hotel, describe the hotel, and the characters, such as Zhu Zhuqing, so what does Zhu Zhuqing look like? This will help improve the writing level. I said a bit too much. Please forgive me if there is anything wrong. I am also a novice and I am still learning.

Currently, I am thinking of two or three female protagonists, and even if there are changes in the future, there won't be many.

I know that what I wrote is really rubbish, like Gouba, but I just want to try it myself, work hard, and embarrass myself when I come back in a few years.

I want to change the title of the book. If you have any suggestions, please let me know. Thank you.

I tried my best in the last platinum four

So the author's name is Scythe but why is the martial spirit a sword?

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