Renzai Aote: Super God Upgrade System at the Beginning

To be honest, I don't know how to write, so we don't have to write emotional scenes. Because this is an Ott story, and it's not like writing a beautiful fantasy like that. In fact, this kind of thing is more or less unnecessary. How long does Ultraman live? How long will your wife live? If it doesn't work, you can turn your wife into Ultraman, and then you two will fly around every day. Then there's nothing to see

To test the poison, you can read it with confidence, especially since this book is considered good at the beginning Recommendations to the author 1 The pace of the Ultraman world is too fast (you wrote the whole world of Ultraman). It is recommended to slow down 2. The elements are too few, (Ultraman will be gone soon like you). It is recommended to add other things, such as chat groups. Of course, it is best not to write fantasy fantasy, which is easy to collapse, and write some anime or Japanese comics. 3 Author, you'd better make better arrangements for the protagonist's daughter. If you don't arrange it well, it will really be your daughter's gift. I believe you will really be sprayed to death by then. The above are all my suggestions. I hope the author can refer to them. Thank you.

This Ottwen was already readable at the starting point. The protagonist's upgrade is a bit too intense.

I feel like the emotional line is a bit redundant.

It looks good from the front, but not so good from the back. Especially the heroine. Don't take it with you every time you go somewhere. You'll get tired of looking at it.

It is strongly recommended that Carmilla's human body be made into a heroine

The upgrade is too intense, and the subsequent plot is difficult to write.

Update quickly. It's not enough. 😡

Update

The level setting is poisonous, and the world of psychic explosion is written as a way to defeat monsters and upgrade.

You, the author, don't want eunuchs. . . . How long has it been since it has been updated? . .

When will it be updated? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I've seen more than a dozen of them, and this batch of emotional dramas is more disgusting than the aloe vera juice in India.

There is really nothing to write about later, and there is no harem and no emotional drama. It just keeps following the plot and pretending to be awesome. No one wants to watch it.

It was the first time I saw a scene of thousands of people with no people.

Ready for TJ? Is this book no longer planned to be updated?

This novel is so short that the entry point is directly Hypageton. If it's not directly on the level of the Mysterious Four, then why bother?

What is that million-word Ultra text experience?