The Most Powerful Summoning System of the Qin Empire

Although this kind of book is more difficult to write, did the author not check it after the first draft was written? There are many typos that affect the quality of reading. There is also an inexplicable feeling that there are missing words in a sentence, making it difficult to read smoothly. What is the system calling for? It is not made clear, nor is the relationship between the summoned characters and the realm of the protagonist. What is the level of the protagonist, and what kind of impact does it have on the heroes summoned by that level? It is also not made clear. Also, your character has too many realm levels. At the beginning of the dynasty, there were almost seven or eight realms, and the differences between realms were not written at all. So what is the use of writing so many realm power systems? The gap between fantasy power levels was not written at all in the article. There is no explanation in any article about how these power levels change, and what kind of power you have when you reach a certain level. There is no explanation at all. So when you write so many levels, I feel that there seems to be no difference between the levels. That's it, I feel This is not a fantasy power system, it is the same as the level of martial arts Really, the author, your power system collapsed without thinking about the layout. I have read books for fifteen or six years. The power system of good books allows people to see the changes of characters after they reach a certain state. It's coming, but you can't see it I suggest you reopen the book and polish the outline. If the outline is unstable and inaccurate, it will be difficult for you to write 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Can you write the background as a theme like Snow Knife or Qing Yu Nian? When summoning, don't use high force. I'm tired of looking at it. I have a small suggestion.

Can you change the beginning of a summoning novel like yours? It all starts with the puppet emperor and it's not interesting at all.

I hope there won't be a female protagonist, or there will be another romance