The Lord of Immortality

Void Divine Palm

Which era is this style of writing?

Come on, author, it's very well written. Excellent work.

I feel like the author is a bit clumsy. There are too many plots written in the main world, and none of them have any specific effects. They are tasteless and would be a pity to discard. And it's too slow. The world of mixed martial arts has just appeared, and it's awesome. How to write a later introduction to the big world? There must be a limit to the slow pace! It's a bit uncomfortable to read! And sometimes it is other worlds and sometimes it is the main world. The switching is too frequent, I feel a little dizzy, and I don't know where it works!

The most annoying thing about reading this book is that it is on the list, and it also stipulates the level of martial arts training. So what else should I practice? When we meet, we can directly shoot each other's secrets to see whose level is higher.

It's okay to post the protagonist's realm attributes. Can your servants also post it to make it funny? Do you have the word count for water?

After reading dozens of chapters, there is one question I still don't understand: Does the level of a skill limit the upper limit of cultivation? (Third-level skills can only be cultivated to the third level, and eighth-level skills can only be cultivated to the eighth level) Isn't this too awkward? Without high-level skills, you will not be able to break through until you die? Then the question is: Where did the original martial arts in this world come from?

The main world setting is too rigid. In addition to joining the imperial court, he is a sect. No other way out? In any world, there are geniuses who can create the following techniques.

The original world is a failure, you might as well just pretend to be awesome by pretending to be a novel, insist on writing the original songs of country folk, and successfully hit the street

I thought I had found an unconventional book, but it turned out to be the same. The younger ones fought against the older ones. During the martial arts competition, there were a lot of emotional parallels. The passers-by didn't believe that the protagonist could win. After that, there were emotional parallels such as shock and horror. Let me go, there are not many people who want to win over the protagonist? A slap in the face is too cliché. In addition, you are said to be a genius, but it turns out that each genius is a wholesaler? Genius, evil genius, what is more evil genius than evil genius?

I don't know if the writing is good or not. I haven't read it yet. Just reading the introduction, I want to ask, have you seen Shading the Sky? Know what the Lord of the Forbidden Zone represents and why every emperor wants to eradicate the Forbidden Zone

Except for ruthless people, all the Lords of the Forbidden Zone in Zhetian killed themselves. I don't know why a person who can travel through the heavens has countless ways to limit the longevity of Zhetian. Why is he so excited to be the Lord of the Forbidden Zone?

I feel like it's so harmonious! ! Kung Fu is only owned by big forces. Those who steal it and break the law are considered to have no master of Kung Fu if their sect is wiped out. There is no one who can destroy it and steal the Kung Fu! Not reasonable at all

You might as well write one world at a time, so that you can still watch it. You are not good at writing about fusion. The plot is messy and makes people uninterested in reading it. These martial arts fans asked you to write... Sigh!

A few chapters are about the Daqian Dynasty, and a few chapters are about Jin Yong's martial arts world. There is no coherent article at all, and the reader is confused. Can I die if I finish writing Jin Yong's martial arts world in one go?

This kind of dialogue mode is a headache to watch. Wasn't this the style many years ago? Now there are actually authors who are convinced that they still use it. Goodbye!

I feel that the setting of martial arts is very poor, and the management of martial arts is too strict. The protagonist practices Lingbo Weibu, Tianshan Plum Breaking Hand, such powerful martial arts, no one can do it. What kind of martial arts is this? Don't you want to play Dynasty? Wouldn't he ask what kind of martial arts this is? Where did it come from? If you can't find it, Dynasty may be able to go to Zhejiang Zhongmen. Do you think you are secretly practicing other people's martial arts? If you look at other novels, martial arts in the martial arts world are not so strict. I think you have dissuaded many people.

This person is considered a monster genius by the author.

I looked confused. I changed it over and over again.

It's really an ink stain. It's a bit heavy.

Finished reading! It feels like it suppresses the protagonist's strength a bit! Don't touch that monster! Then he was slapped in the face🤭🤭🤭

Another amazing setting that comes out without even taking a picture of the forehead. The entire protagonist's family cannot live longer than 25 years old? In reality, this race has long since become extinct. Let's not mention what happens to orphans when their parents die. Just looking at this lifespan, it is estimated that there are so few people in the tribe that they can't even compete for water in the village. The author really thinks that the countryside in feudal society was peaceful, right?

The introduction is really poorly written. After staying in Jin Yong's world for eighty years, a boy will not be able to become an ancestor and have the nerve to time travel? Only two hundred years ago were there gods on land? What kind of terrestrial deity? The kind where Huang Yi's world is shattered and void? If it were that kind of land fairy, the protagonist would be almost the same as a pig.

You actually call him Dong Bo. He was not adopted by you since he was a child. You should call him Xiaodong.

Phantom Shadow

I'm a little curious as to why there are so few astronomical texts writing about mortals cultivating immortality 🙂

I am the first 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Update more. No need to read

Your martial arts classes are too obvious. The suppression of low-level people by high-level people is too strong. It feels very wrong.

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