I Get Stronger Every Time I Take on a Disciple

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Can a plane fly to Africa in 11 days?😰

The writing is not bad, but it needs to be more refined. It can have more dialogue, expressions and psychological portrayals, and avoid long descriptions. The system can also consider adding branches such as elixirs and fairy grass, and then stick to the main line and open a copy every once in a while.

The first thing I felt when I read this book was that the writing was really good, it felt unexpected, and it didn't make you feel tired while reading, which is very good.

Generally speaking, the writing is quite good. The book has the flavor of a mortal's journey to immortality, but it is a little easier than a mortal's. Overall, it is a good seedling. Come on, author, I have collected it and I will give you recommendation votes every day.

Let me know when it's available and help with your first order.

A very good book, I have been reading it.

I'm so envious of these 8,000 recommendation votes, my God, and this collection, I'm so envious🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋 Big brother collects me in points, I'm not greedy, just one percent is fine...

Uh uh uh... The name of this book has actually been changed again... What's going on, isn't it said that it can only be changed once every 80 days... The real situation is that the book has been sent to the site and will be signed in a few days, and the editor helped change the name. I hope everyone can support this work as always, thank you~

The net is being cast wider and wider, what's next is what's next.