I Open a Bar in Marvel

See Chapter 11, how many kilometers can a pistol shoot? And there are no obstacles in the middle? Are your bullets turning infinitely? Horrible

Don't just run away to Tony, that's so poisonous. People can come out on their own.

I wrote more than 70 tickets in just four months, so you can imagine how speechless the content will be.

When I saw that the warden was sent to prison and still endured the humiliation 😏😏😏, I would kill everyone except the warden and prison guards, death racing. How can I compare to no one? I cut the entire island in half right in front of him.

I can tolerate being fucked no matter what, and I still practice shit. It would be great to just fuck someone to death.

First, the author likes Little Pepper. When he sees the protagonist running all the way to protect him every day, he really wants to give up. Second, the protagonist's hero outfit is a Republic of China robe, and his hair is still a long whip, preferably not a Qing Dynasty hairstyle.

160,000 Words Single-digit monthly ticket Eunuch Bar

When writing about Marvel, just write about Marvel. Why mix so many other comics?

I persisted until Chapter 39. Sorry, I really can't continue. What on earth was written? . . . . ? ? ?

The plot of a headshot with a pistol from thousands of meters away is indeed a bit poisonous! If you write this gun as magic power, or some kind of superimposed buff effect, it will be fine! However, no! There is only one who awakens naturally! Very embarrassing...

See Chapter 3: Mutants Appear Goodbye

Open a hotel, open a bar, open a weapons store, open an agency store, open a restaurant, open a martial arts gym,,,

Let's go into the factory. The first chapter is so confusing at the beginning. What the hell?

The book review is a bunch of jingoistic elements, which is disgusting. 🙃

The author's overall planning ability needs to be improved. After reading 90 chapters, I can't figure out what the main content is.

The plot jumps too fast, and I can't catch up with each chapter. It's very difficult to read.

It's too watery! It's a lot of nonsense, and I can't get to the point for a long time. It made me sleepy

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