
Mystery: Star Key
诡秘:星之匙
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After checking, the only ones that are not occupied in sequence 0 are the Judge, the Hermit, the Destiny, the Red Priest, the White Tower, the Twilight Giant, and the God of Death (others that are trying to give birth to children are the Abyss, and they may not trap themselves in it). 1. If Dark Night wants to advance to the past, Death is uniquely in Dark Night's hands. There is no way to go. The Twilight Giant is also very difficult. It is bound to have a fight with Dark Night's sister, which is probably difficult. (×) 2. The Sun God has returned, and the White Tower is also a target for recycling. The Dreamer's ability is too buggy, and it is also impossible to get through. (×) 3. The witch is still there, and it is difficult for the Red Priest to be promoted to the Old Ones. However, if you just hit him head-on, you may not be able to win, just like Xiao Ke robbed Amon, stealing the uniqueness of the original witch to advance to the old days (by the way, let's taste the original witch, suck it up). (O) 4. I think there is a high probability that the hermit has the 0 sequence. Otherwise, Roselle would not have stepped into the black emperor, but would have taken the hermit route. So it depends on how the author writes it. There is a god or no god in a single thought. If it is not written, you can jump, and then in a half-mad state, you can find a way to eliminate the characteristics of the apprentice path (having children), and kill the perfect person to advance to the past. (O) So what remains are the Judge, and Destiny! 5. It depends on your luck to jump to the judge, you will either be half crazy or completely crazy. If you are completely crazy, you are GG. If you are half crazy, you will have a boss. You will have children directly and eliminate the apprenticeship path. It happened that the Black Emperor next door was sleeping. After giving birth to a child, Roselle's uniqueness was promoted to the past. Roselle was demoted, just in time to help him wash away the pollution and wake him up. (O) 6. Destiny, most likely just a half-crazy way, is the Mystery series fooling Destiny? There are exactly two snakes and no 0 sequence. The only difficult thing is that the two snakes are better at hiding and have incredible luck. Goldfinger: True Luck Aura, how to catch the snake is a difficult problem. (O) Summary: The difficulty level is 5<4<6<3 The most wanted to see is 3>6>5>4 (after all, I want to taste the taste of a witch, suck it up) Or the only other option is to write about the invasion of alien gods from the universe, and then break into the enemy and steal their ways, but it is not easy to write...
A belated reflection on the full order: the researcher's literature
There is a contradiction in this book after the author conceived it: the purpose of expressing the praise of mystery and the brilliance of human nature (humanistic care) does not meet the needs of an online article, and will inevitably lead to miserable data related to readers. The author is one of those rare researchers who regards mystery as the pinnacle of online literature, and even looks at mystery with the same perspective as traditional literature. Yes, a researcher and not just a fan. The result is that the author does not have the identity characteristics of a mysterious fan in the general sense. Although the author shares with book fans his obsession with worldview structure, emotional resonance with characters, plot design and other elements, the author will not regard Mystery as just an excellent online novel. The starting point and purpose of the author and the reader are different, so this book has poor results from beginning to end. Only readers who have the same feelings as the author can read it. Therefore, there is no need to expect anything from the results and reader comments of this book. It is just a personal choice. Meeting some book friends who have the same feelings for mystery is already a great gain. Personally, since Mystery has not reached the status of traditional literature for me but is just the pinnacle of online literature, I can't really read it (laughing, but it's true. But it's also because there are very few literatures that require me to invest as much emotion as the author. So far, maybe only Dream of Red Mansions and The Brothers Karamazov are worthy of me). But let's evaluate it. In addition to the differences in needs caused by different starting points and purposes, technically I think one thing is that the protagonist's own portrayal lacks some "real" elements (I would feel beaten if I said it was too mysterious), and it is not very natural. Another point is that the plot about Zion is a bit thin. For example, since it is the core second design, can the so-called blood of the stars and the ruins of Duke Bilgenworth appear in reality to create an atmosphere early, or can they be used as historical legends to have an impact on the Fifth Age? The third point is completely a difference in stance, because the author's starting point is to play a hymn to Secret and provide warmth and help to Xiaoke, so it is inevitable that there is more truth, goodness and beauty in the book. Apart from that, I don't have anything to fault. The author's grasp of details and level of attentiveness are rare among all mysterious fans, but this is the icing on the cake for an online article. The real foundation of an online article is not necessarily how to narrate, but how to write the content that readers expect, and on this basis, move closer to writing skills. I think the author has taken a step too far to learn the skills of writing online articles from Squid. Squid's success lies in his almost perfect integration of readers' expectations and requirements for structure, plot design, and the understanding of human nature that the public needs. If the author still plans to devote himself to online writing, then I think he can start from some best-selling LV.5 Level writers. Flaws and defects are more instructive than perfection. If the author intends to learn "writing" and write articles to convey his teachings, then I think if he wants to practice it on the online article platform, he should not expect feedback from readers, and he does not need to care about the frequency of updates. In this case, it is just right to study Cui Cui, because in my opinion Cui Cui is at a level just above Internet literature and not yet full of literature, and is more suitable for learning writing than the contemporary literary giants. The above is the words of one family.
[Format] About the protagonist's final sequence level
Let me talk about the conclusion first. First of all, thank you very much for your enthusiastic suggestions and discussions! Let me see the pinnacle that the protagonist of the Gate Path can reach in the extraordinary world! Secondly, after careful consideration, I finally decided that within the scope of writing this article, I will not become a god, but at most angel level, and I will leave a blank at the end. If you cannot accept this result... Recommended readers and secret keepers! These two books will definitely satisfy this need! Moreover, the two authors have done a very good job with their research. It is simply mysterious Leeuwenhoek. You will definitely not be disappointed after reading this book. As for me... Forgive me for wanting to stick to the original intention of this book and my own principles. Then let's talk about the reason why we only write about the angel level. I have been thinking about this for the past two days, and writing about Angel Level was my original plan. There are two main reasons why it is not written as God. First, the apprentice path is my favorite path in Secret, and Mr. Door is also my very, very favorite character. The second favorite is Gou Sanjia's other two channels. So I won't look for other options besides Gou Sanjia. The pinnacle of the Gou San family is Klein. As Klein's chef, I will never touch Klein. Even the characters in the original work, except for the evil god and a few villains, I will not touch them. Seat, under this principle, the protagonist cannot become a god. Second, becoming a god, in my opinion, is not just the pinnacle of power, the pinnacle of upgrades, and the pinnacle of pathways. It is also a grand narrative theme involving "the balance between humanity and divinity". My current knowledge base has not yet reached the point where I can tell this story well, nor have I accumulated enough sense of mission to elaborate on this theme. Since there is no creative impulse, let alone the ability to create, this narrative theme cannot be written well. Then it is better to stick to the original intention of this book and explain the theme you want to explain well. Write about Klein and the world that Klein protects. As for the arrival of the Outer Gods, the protagonist is an ant. He can only watch from the side, and then he is swept away. In the end, the result is GG... Isn't there also Klein! He is a pillar-level old man who still has humanity and goodwill towards the world. Igna became an angel under the seat of the Fool, which is also the only way to become a god. As for whether he can become a god, leave it to Klein to decide. p. S I really think the idea of using the aura that pervades the Western Continent is very powerful! There is still hope for the Gou San family! P. S. If you really can't accept it, please calmly cancel the collection. The Reader and the Keeper, and The Mystery Part 2 will definitely satisfy your needs!
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The author is really stubborn. He is writing a fanfic that is destined to be a bust. He can obviously write a mysterious fanfic, but he insists on writing the story after Xiaoke falls asleep.
[Original intention] I have a dream
I hope to pass on my love for mystery to the hands of writer Sequence 0. I hope Cuttlefish can read this article. I hope I can tell him that I am lucky to meet Klein, the Lord of Mysteries, and the squid who insists on describing the world. - As expected from this article, you should be able to sign a contract If you sign a contract and join V. All subscription income is used to donate money to Xiao Zhou💫 Let Xiao Zhou be the protector of poor children in our world! (Tipping can be regarded as a reward for my hard work. After all, for the long term, I still can't just use love to generate electricity🌠)
After returning home from school, I found out that Star Key has ended. I originally thought about picking up a new copy and reading it again, but it ended like this. I thought the protagonist would at least be Star Key, but I have to say that the author was able to write such an ending in the face of dismal results. It is really admirable. I thought that the Chinese name pointed to Xiao Ke's true self, and would not be interfered by Tianzun, but I didn't expect that it was Xiao Ke's humanity. This foreshadowing almost buried a novel 😠
I don't care how high the protagonist can be promoted to, I just hope that the protagonist can carry forward the apprentice path and make full use of the apprentice's abilities in each sequence.
Fans of fans: Battle! For Melissa!
[Gods and angels, please allow me to introduce myself. I am Mr. Fool's most loyal, humble, and most knowledgeable servant, the omniscient Arrodes. Now, let me explain today's showdown to you. Standing on the left side of the duel is the rising star of the Abraham family, the Lord's latest favorite, His Highness Igna Abraham, who is good at writing and music. Standing on the right side of the duel is the most valued subordinate of His Highness "Justice", His Excellency John Reed, who has dug out gold from thousands of years of sand and created a common method for all gods to maintain humanity. Today, they will be here to decide the winner in a duel. Let us first listen to what the audience thinks of this duel - Miss Magician, the favored one of the Lord, believes that His Highness Ignat's victory is beyond doubt: "He is already an Archangel of Sequence 1, while John only has Sequence 3. I don't think this battle is meaningful." But the noble Highness "Justice" has a different view. : "We cannot underestimate the power of knowledge. The potential of knowledge that can benefit all gods is beyond conventional imagination." "I think the final outcome cannot be determined yet." So, let us take a look, is the glory of the Abraham family shining in the sky of the star realm, or is the iron law of sequence rules being broken, and a revolution in the extraordinary world has begun? ……………… Above the gray mist, Klein, who was entrenched in the middle of the throne, scratched his tentacles and said to Audrey on the side: "Arrods is very suitable to be a host." Audrey was curiously studying the screen in front of her. This is a device very similar to the television set of the old days, but it is obviously blessed with occult symbols. In fact, it is an internal version of the temporary circulation between gods and angels. Hearing Klein's sigh, she explained: "Arrodes has been rehearsing for a long time. Just for the tone of the opening, he tried three different versions." "It deliberately makes the reason for the duel sound high-sounding, but we all know that this is not the case." Hearing this, Klein's face showed a smile: "You said , what would Melissa think if she knew about this duel? " "I think our two duelists will trick her into it. She will probably think that they are really testing whether John's fused Western Continent extraordinary system can fight against Sequence 1 angels. " Klein smiled, said nothing, and waited quietly while waving his tentacles. The showdown is about to begin. ……………… [Now, the two players are already in their respective positions. Oh, we can see that His Highness Igna took a half-step back very gracefully. He was showing humility to the other party. After all, the other party was just a demigod. In the upcoming duel, he may be half a step behind. And Sir John accepted this humility calmly! He began to prepare in advance. Oh! Oh my gosh! What did he take out! A stick, no, a wand! Wait a minute, is he going to use the "Avada Big Melon"? Let's wait and see. Okay, I don't know if you have noticed, but our referee has also come on stage. It's Mr. Hugh! Have you seen that little dot on the edge of the duel field? That is Mr. Hugh! Obviously, she is also a demigod, so she dare not get too close to the duel. This makes her look extra small in front of the camera! Now, she raises her hand! This means the showdown is about to begin! Let's count down together! Three! Two! One! Start! John's wand glows! Lord! Turns out to be blind and foolish! It is the Lord's authority to fool! As a demigod, John actually used the authority of the great master! And this is not a poor imitation, because Igna really got it! His eyes are now straight and he is completely unable to move! John's magic wand turned out to be the result of his fusion of the extraordinary systems of the Western Continent! It plays the role of the Western Continent's legal system! What should I do? Will His Highness Ignat be completely at a disadvantage because of his humility? No, He moved, and the light of morning glowed around His body! It's the Dawn Armor of the "Warrior" path! It was recorded by Igna and originated from the ability of the great goddess of the night! He has written the power of release into His instincts! Therefore, such a defense is not affected by "blindness and ignorance" at all! I bet that this is definitely Igna's training to prepare himself for real-life dangers. But at this moment, His usual strictness with Him had an unexpected effect! Now, attacks at the physical level will be ineffective against His Highness Igna. And, under the rays of the morning light, His reason began to awaken! It seems that Lord John is unable to regain the complete authority of God after all. If my great master uses this ability, His Highness Igna will lose all intelligence from then on and become less intelligent than a child. This is the great and unfathomable power of the gods! When Sir John lost the opportunity, his situation became precarious. Oh! Look! He turned into a bunch of symbols! These symbols flew towards His Highness Igna! If His Highness Igna is allowed to get close enough, he will be able to do anything to John in the symbolic state! And John couldn't resist at all! He chose the lightning attack! This is indeed the most violent and damaging attack method! Is Lord John about to end in failure? Oh! Wait a minute! He conjured up a paper double! He escaped! He's back to his original self! But how did he get it in time? When he was transformed into a symbol by His Highness Igna, he apparently briefly lost his autonomy! Okay, we are temporarily connected to His Highness "Justice" here. After His Highness "Justice"'s explanation, Arrodes learned that with the help of the extraordinary achievements of the Western Continent, Sir John improved the use of the paper man substitute and turned it into a passively triggered defensive skill. Of course, using such a substitute ability requires the protection of a great master! Well, it seems that our battle will not end until Sir John uses up all his paper figures. But the paper man will eventually run out. Mr. John, you have to think of a solution quickly! Wait a minute! Look! What did John do! He created a closed space and hid himself! Lord! Why would he do this! Doesn't he understand that His Highness Igna, as the "Star Key", is the most familiar with space? We saw Ignar hesitate. Obviously, He also felt that such a move was unreasonable, and His choice was to treat it with caution. He thought it might be a trap. He did not crack the door of space! He seems to want to destroy the entire space! Oh! Look! What power He unleashed! Even our duel ground is shaking. If it were not maintained by the power of the gods, it would have been broken long ago! The "Star Key" does not have such ability to control space! This is the power of the outer gods! It is the power of the "high-dimensional overlooker" recorded by His Highness Igna when he was traveling in the starry sky! His rich experiences have created his rich accumulation! And this is something John can't compare to. We see John using a paper double again! He is in a bad situation now! His space has been completely shattered. Oh, wait! What is that! Something flew towards Igna! It's a bomb! It's a bomb made by "artisans"! It's a trap buried in a closed space! Because of the fragmentation of space, he flew out! We can see that His Highness Igna was stunned! He had no idea that the bomb made by the craftsmen would be used to harm himself! Oh oh oh! He was grieved! This gave him no time to react! He was hit by a bomb! At the critical moment, Igna's instinct saved him again! It's Dawn Armor again! This is the gift of the great goddess of the night! This great god once ushered in the glory of the great master for us, and now still envelopes believers and His Highness Igna with mercy. His Royal Highness Igna is going to fight back! With the power of His recorded peace! Every power of the night goddess recorded by His Highness Igna is so powerful and gentle! Oh, wait! Why is His damage diminished? It's a bribe! That bomb was a bribe! John can summon the power of the Great Master with more than just his wand! He also contacted Emperor Russell! I want to know, when did John contact the Emperor? No one knows this! Could it be that he had exchanged experiences with the Emperor about what it was like to be a witch? Oh! Wait a minute! His wand exploded! What's going on! Be a great host! The Great Master would not allow him to use his authority any longer. We saw that John was talking quickly! He is explaining! He was explaining that he had never experienced what it was like to be a witch! But the great master wouldn't accept it! Oh! He was pushed into the earth! Mr. John, I think you have a saying called "The person who is close to the ink is black". Now I give it to you, Mr. John. We saw His Highness Igna smiling! He won the duel. But He probably thinks this method is very funny! He lifted John up with grace! Oh! Our Highness Igna is always so gentle and kind! Gods and angels, our duel ends here! This duel allowed us to see how the apprentice's glory still shines, and how amazing the teaching system—which should now be called the wand system—is. Of course, if you want to use the wand system to enhance yourself, you must serve the great master sincerely, making the master very satisfied like Arrods. Okay, our show is coming to an end here. Next, everyone is invited to watch the TV series, Rose Love on the Sea.
[Collection] Collection of sealed items
Magical item sealed item. Roughly set the name, number (if in the church), appearance, positive and negative effects.
[Completion Gift] Fans of Fans: Church of Fools BBQ Competition
"Ladies and gentlemen, gods and angels, welcome everyone to the grand event of our Church of the Fool, to today's barbecue competition!" "I am your favorite church seal, Mr. Fool's most loyal, humble, and trustworthy servant, the great Lord Arrodes." "Today, we will be here to compete in our cooking skills and present the most delicious barbecue to the great, noble Mr. Fool, who we devoutly believe in. !" "Now, take your place, time, start!" "First, we see the Lord's descendants and the noble 'Justice' lady." "Oh, she can't light the fire. . Lord, she almost burned herself." "Miss Justice seemed a little distressed. Look, she closed her eyes. She decided to use the power of her dream to bring the flames into reality." "Oh, the great fool. Sir, what happened! Miss "Justice" blew up the "salted fish" on the side, ah, it was Miss "Magician"!" "Fortunately, the two ladies are not afraid of the flames. It seems that these two ladies have to withdraw from today's competition." "Let's turn our attention to the angel of the Lord, the great Igna." >"He had successfully lit the fire and had already taken out a bunch of mutton and started roasting it. We saw His Highness Igna, ah, no, it was His Majesty Igna's skewer of fat and thin mutton, which shows that he carefully selected and prepared it." "In Next to His Highness Igna, is the Lord's warmth and favor, the respected Miss Melissa Moretti." "Miss Melissa also lit the fire very skillfully, which shows her rich cooking experience. She is rich in experience, which can also be seen from the increasingly fat and thin figure of Her Majesty. "Today she is preparing a fish. The fish will always have a different texture and flavor when paired with the fire, let us look forward to Miss Melissa's work." Players are different. This kind of strategy requires more precise control of the heat, and there is a risk of burning at any time. Let's look forward to how Ms. Anthea performs. "Oops, Ms. Anthea's hand suddenly shook. The meat was burnt! It seems that she missed the promotion today." "We saw a look of regret on Ms. Anthea's face. This is the fine tradition of cherishing food in Silver City. Wait a minute, she cut off the burnt meat and ate it. !" "Don't eat baked food, Ms. Anthea, it will increase the risk of cancer-oh, well, demigods don't get cancer." "Let's look at the next contestant. For example, his father's teacher, the former Death Archon, His Highness Azik Eggers. "Eh? What is your Highness Azik doing? He is wrapping the food in earth! His Majesty Azik wants to try the cooking of ancient times." Method? But can this still be called a barbecue? " "Okay, we are now connected to the referee of this competition, Miss Judgment. I don't know." "Now, as time goes by, the production of each player has reached a critical stage, and we have also received the first impression points from the great Mr. Fool." "We are ranked first. It seems that Mr. Fool wants to eat mutton today. The second place is naturally Miss Melissa, who is an expert in cooking. Her cooking skills are proved by the fatness of His Majesty. " " , wait a moment, please wait a moment! We can see that when we announced the ranking of the second place, His Highness Igna's hand suddenly shook violently!" "This caused the chili powder in his hand to be almost completely wrapped in it! Put on the mutton skewers." "And we all know that the great Mr. Fool's tolerance for spicy food is limited." "If this continues, His Highness Igna's mutton skewers will lose to the championship.!" ",''!!,," ",!,,," "Your Highness, you are simply provoking! Do you think that the great Mr. Fool can't deal with a small mutton skewer?" "However, His Highness Igna's provocative behavior also means that he will definitely miss the championship position. Then if nothing else happens, the champion of this game will be our original second place, Miss Melissa." "Oh! I suddenly understood why His Highness Igna would hit his hand when he heard the announcement of the second place. Shake off too much chili powder." "I understand, but I won't say it!" "Okay, now that all the works have been completed, let's take a look at the final rankings awarded by Mr. Fool. Please allow me to emphasize the rules of the competition. The top three works will be sent to the gray fog to be tasted by Mr. Fool." "The second place is undoubtedly Miss Melissa, who has a superb cooking skills. Your Highness Azik. The third place..." "Wait a minute! Wait a minute! What did I see?" "The third place is Miss Justice who blew up the oven!" "Oh my Lord, what did I see? ! Miss Justice actually won the third place! Is this a distortion of divinity or a loss of morality?" "Let's take a look at Mr. Fool's answer, which seems to be that he will never eat so much. Lamb skewers with chili noodles! No matter who is provoking him in public, he can't shake his determination." "Let's see if His Majesty Igna is feeling disappointed." "Oh! He is not disappointed at all! He only wanted to eat the mutton skewers he grilled!" "His Royal Highness Ignar didn't want to offer it to the Lord, he just wanted to eat it himself! Oh! They ate it so deliciously!" The roast contest ends here. " "However, the end of this program means the beginning of the next one. " "Why did the crazy adventurer board the Star Admiral's ship at night? Why did Vice Admiral Iceberg sit alone in the captain's cabin? What kind of love will lead to hatred? Welcome everyone to watch the next TV series, "The Love of Roses on the Sea". " ... This is my version of Arrodes, not the licking dog in this book. But that's not important. Warm congratulations on the completion of Pan Pan Xing's Key! ! ! Throw flowers! ! ! Throw flowers! ! ! Throw flowers! ! ! Spread flowers in circles! ! !
In fact, it's good if fans don't have to write to sequence 0 and write to sequence 2. They can just wait for Xiao Ke to wake up! Didn't Squid initially say that he was only going to write Sequence 2? But in the end, for the sake of a complete world view, I upgraded to the old days!
I like Klein very much because he said: There are always some things that are higher than others. The protagonist is also such a person. Every time he sees Senior Zhou tutoring the protagonist, his humanity is revived. They help each other and make up for the vacancy in their hearts about the past. This is the best fanfic I think was written during Klein's slumber period.
After catching up on the latest, I saw that the author said that updates are dropping soon. Maybe as a reader, I can make a small suggestion. It can be seen that the author is careful about the copy of Zion's Dream, and the description of the battle is also very good. However, the rhythm of the exchange between Zion and the protagonist group before each battle is a bit slow, and it easily gives people a "watery" feeling. It's not that the author is perfunctory, but the amount of information given is too little, leaving no memory points. First of all, dialogue and Ignar's psychological activities account for the majority. Originally, dialogue is relatively slow in promoting the plot and the amount of information is relatively shallow. Secondly, in some sentences, that is, most of the questions, it can be seen that the author is emphasizing the mystery of this space and the secrets behind it, including the origin of Zion. But Igna has been to this space many times with his promotion, and has already guessed and understood its mysterious secrets. The atmosphere rendering in this aspect can be slightly simpler. And the author's customary method is to start a paragraph with a question, and several paragraphs are filled with surprises and small speculations about the information given by Zion. But considering the character design, Igna is already a demigod who has experienced several battles and is a senior Beyonder. His speculations can be more certain and more confident. Instead of simply expressing them in questions, consider connecting the character's demeanor and thoughts into a whole. The performance effect may be better. After all, repetitive formats can easily make readers feel visual and aesthetic fatigue. Finally, some of these dialogues and psychological descriptions give repeated information... This is not appropriate. For example, in the chapter "Questions and Answers", Zion uses "them" to describe the enemy. Ignar then asks four questions in a row. The first sentence is "So they will encounter angel-level enemies later", and the second sentence is "Why are they facing angel-level enemies?". Finally, he emphasizes the angelic rank of the enemy, which is quite redundant in terms of information. Perhaps it would be more appropriate to integrate these four sentences into one paragraph, for example: Igna's eyelids twitched, and while he was secretly surprised/uneasy that he was about to face an angel-level enemy (or that there were multiple angel-level beings in this space), he suddenly realized that maybe this was the reason why Zion had been asking him to find helpers after he was promoted to "Wanderer". Such redundant parts appear quite often in dialogues... For example, there are many times when Igna's psychological activities are shocked, "What kind of experiment is this? What kind of disagreement is this?", And other characters will ask this question later, which means that the reader has read this sentence twice. Personally, the reading experience is not very good. I feel that this redundant situation is an attempt by the author to strengthen the serial relationship between the characters and connect the context in the scene where multiple characters are present, but the effect is not achieved. The part about Extraordinary Combat is blameless, that is, the ratio of combat to dialogue, or the proportion of dialogue does not match the amount of information it should have. It seems to me that the most recent part is the only problem. In fact, it is not easy to keep writing and updating after work. It can be really tiring, but the author's performance is generally quite stable, and I hope the author will not be too demanding on himself. Part-time writing is still a fan work, and the data may not be so good, but the feeling of witnessing a new story to the end together with the readers is irreplaceable. Not many Mystery fans write about the remnants of the old days, and even fewer have access to the secrets. I look forward to seeing this article come to a successful conclusion before Mystery 2 appears. 23333 Come on, madam!
Come on, have a heroine, please, please, please, our apprentice path is fast, and we are not afraid of the end. We just need to bring someone with us. It's not like we don't have tall people to support us.
I think the writing is very good. Igna and Xiaoke in this book are both angels, and the writing is also good. Why is a good book not popular?
Finished spreading flowers, looking forward to the next one
This is the protagonist in my imagination, with Chinese style clothes painted blindly.
Happy birthday Klein✨
The Fool who does not belong to this era, The mysterious master above the gray fog, The King of Yellow and Black who controls good luck. (Cake, sweet ice tea, donation certificate) Dear Zhou Mingrui, Klein Moretti, the great Mr. Fool, Happy birthday! Thank you for coming into this world, and thank you for lighting the way for countless people. Your perseverance, the hope you bring, and your stories are all passed down by word of mouth. This book and the previous book are all what I want to say to you. Wish you a happy birthday, you deserve everything good. I wish you many wonderful springs! ! - Star Key income has been donated, and Wheel of Fortune X plans to do the same! (Although the statistics of "Secret: Wheel of Fortune
Come on, author, the stars in this book are the best I have ever seen in a fanfic😳
New book released! "Mystery: Wheel of Fortune X"
It's my flow 2.0. The fate of the protagonist is aboriginal. The desire to write in the ring is hard to calm down. I want to write more stories belonging to fools. After you fall asleep, there are still many people around you and behind you. Someone inherits your will and sticks to it in a chaotic world. Someone hears your story and volunteers to join your team. Someone has been blessed by you and is following your traces. Someone knows your true intentions and will not give up looking for every possibility to wake you up. Still want to see more of the traces you left in this world. Strictly follow the mysterious world view and the 1.0 World line. The world line of Ring 2.0 Will change due to the butterfly effect. It is a slow-burning story. There is Backlund's Church of Fools, Curly Baboon Research Society, and Klein's Dream. - [Introduction to the book "Secret: Wheel of Fortune "How can we successfully awaken Mr. Fool?" "... I don't know." "But, we will keep working hard, won't we?" - ※The protagonist is a native of Loen, the monster path. Do not travel to Intis unless necessary. ※Goal: To write about the efforts of the Tarot Master, about the efforts made by believers to awaken him, about the Church of the Fool, and about the mental journey of the Fool in the indigenous faith. The story timeline begins three years after Xiaoke fell asleep. ※Updated every day at 11:45 and 18:45. The plot is flowing and slow.
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The kind of protagonist who doesn't know the plot?
Angrua cute new author Goutou
My father's seal, classmate Xiao Yi, you are such a clever little kid!
Su Yuanning, you are a clever little boy!
The author is very capable of cutting knives... I'm afraid
Guys, are the finished book recommendation votes still useful? I never knew what recommendation votes are for and what they are used for.
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