Miss Saint Is so Cute

I bet this Lily will fall in love with the male protagonist later on

Controller of white hair

Your cover... Why isn't this saint called Cecilia?

The author is a serious person. He promotes positive culture in the group and will never post any LSP culture🐶1048496074

Let's talk about how to create a lovable female character who serves as an "anti-wingman" in the early stage - thought of by the maid in this game As a serious maid lover, this is the first time I encountered a maid character (except the villain) in an online article that I don't like. Although I have written a few paragraphs in this chapter, I feel it is not systematic, so I will write it here to discuss some of my thoughts with you. Anti-"wingman" in the early stage, real wingman or a harem role in the middle and late stages. Although it is not very popular, it still has a market in online articles. From a plot perspective, the existence of these characters can not only increase the ups and downs of the plot in the early stage, but also the process of the male protagonist conquering these characters, the contrast after successfully conquering these characters, and the Shura field are also very interesting to watch. However, if it is not handled well, it will lead to extremely unpleasant situations in the early stage and forced whitewashing in the later stage. I reflected on these characters and tried to summarize some of the keys to successfully creating them. First of all, the role positioning must be justified. That is to say, the identity of the character is suitable and the reason is sufficient. The most suitable roles here are teachers and elders. Relatively speaking, these people's interference in the emotional life of the younger generation will be less objectionable. Then there are good friends and besties. It is also common to care about the lives of friends. It would be very inappropriate to interfere in the emotional life of the master as a maid. Just like you wouldn't think that your housekeeping aunt is qualified to take care of your emotional life, unless the relationship between you is very close, just like the elders and younger generations. Therefore, it is necessary to add corresponding descriptions to increase the attributes of relatives and friends in the description, thereby improving the rationality of the identity. In this work, I know that the author definitely wanted to portray the maid as the kind of character who grew up together, looks like a maid, but is actually a best friend. However, there is a lack of corresponding description, lack of psychological description or language description, so we cannot see the emotional interaction between the maid and the heroine. As a result, the reader can only receive very limited information, and the image of the maid is also very stereotyped. The second is to have a sufficient reason. The most classic one is the excuse of "affecting cultivation" in the novels about cultivating immortals. Then it was not explained from the beginning where the maid's huge resentment towards the male protagonist came from. Especially when the male protagonist had already gained the approval of the old butler through a series of actions, why was there still such great hostility and wariness? Later, the author found a reason, saying that she had been indoctrinated into the stereotype that men have bad intentions, but the people who instilled this idea in her already recognized the male protagonist. In short, without giving sufficient reasons, readers will only feel that this character is an inexplicable paranoid. The third thing is that in terms of behavior, elders and younger generations can do different things. The elders can expressly prohibit the heroine from falling in love with the hero, but the peers only have the right to make suggestions. After all, we are all modern people, and no one would think that their peers can hinder others from free love through actions. In this work, the maid can express her opinions and suggestions when facing the heroine, and remind the heroine to be careful of the male protagonist (this kind of dialogue is very expressive and creates two characters at the same time). When facing the male protagonist, it is very reasonable to keep things official and not make pretense. But he made no secret of his dislike for the male protagonist, considering that the male protagonist is not only a guest, but also a benefactor and a partner. Everyone will think that this character is a person who does not distinguish between good and bad, and does not distinguish between importance and importance. It even reminds me of some classic images of evil servants bullying their masters in The Red Mansion.         ，，，（） Therefore, it is best to escape from this kind of plot with one blow, such as taking the woman away directly; or quickly change your face and give up the obstruction after the woman expresses her firm position. Continuously interfering with the relationship between two people like this article will not only disgust the readers, but also cause the fifth problem, the collapse of the male and female protagonists. The attitudes of the male and female protagonists when they are thwarted are worth writing and must be written. They can be firm, I have decided on something in this life; they can be entangled, how should I choose between practice and love; they can be confident, he is not what you imagined, etc. In this type of plot, the characters of the male and female protagonists and their views on each other at the current stage can be fully reflected. However, in this work, both the male and female protagonists lack effective responses to the maid's resentment towards the male protagonist. In the relevant plot, the god disappears, which is very helpless. (It even increases the sense of immediacy that the evil servant deceives the master) In fact, if such characters want to be liked, they often have to give conditions or give them a test. To put it bluntly, we need to have hope and not just talk to death. If you can prove it to me in any way, I will allow you to fall in love freely (and then you will be slapped in the face by pretending to be happy), but this article does not even include the previous step, so naturally this will not happen.          ，， Finally, there are other shining points, because no matter what, hindering the male protagonist is a big minus. If you want the audience to like this character, you must provide some shining points in time to capture the audience's heart (it must be before the audience becomes disgusted with her. Once the audience becomes disgusted with her, there will be a sense of forcible whitewashing).         ， Just in case you suspect that I am advertising (these works don't need advertising), and I can't remember much of the content clearly. I will simply talk about some related settings without naming names. 1. Taoist Aunt A, from the palace of a certain cultivator. I object to my apprentice being with the male protagonist. The reason is because it doesn't conform to their sect's way of practice. The apprentice himself also knew that what the master did was right. Although this character has been misunderstood as a staid old woman in the early stage, because she took away the heroine twice, she was able to escape with one blow, and she could talk about it, so she didn't say anything to death. As long as the male and female majors have reached a certain level and have no worries, they are allowed to post. So the initial feeling for the audience is not that bad. The strategy for the middle and late stages is also very natural.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 My best friend is a big boss in the military. She just couldn't find a good formula for the drug order between the heroine's company and the military, so she asked the hero to show his value and help the heroine solve this problem. A few chapters later, he fell into a trap and was quickly rescued by the male protagonist. This also changed my view of the male protagonist 3. Oiran B comes from a certain historical harem story. He has a good relationship with the heroine, who is also a courtesan, and has a slight lily tendency. Contrary to the heroine's personality, she is very lively and cute. Before starting to cause trouble, it created a lot of goodwill in the readers' minds. At the beginning, he felt that the male protagonist's social status was low, and he was afraid that the female protagonist would be abandoned. He also hoped that the female protagonist would never marry and stay close to him. Therefore, he often acts as a lightbulb when the male and female protagonists meet to prevent them from doing inappropriate things. But it didn't really prevent the male and female protagonists from accumulating feelings. On the contrary, they were attracted to the male protagonist during their long-term relationship. The biggest skill of making this character not to be disliked is the sense of comedy. Every move he makes is like a comedy character. At the same time, there are also some shining plot points that make readers not tired of this character but also happy. 4. Maid Ding, Zijuan from a certain Red Mansion fanfiction. At first, I felt that the male protagonist was a maverick and his family status was low. She is more inclined to Baoyu, so she would advise Hairtail not to get too close to the male protagonist. After being educated by Hairtail, she gradually discovered the advantages of the male protagonist, and transformed into a wingman. But when the male and female protagonists are dating, they will still watch over them and not let them cross the line (understandable in a feudal society). In addition, there is also a plot in the middle that reflects her personal shining points to dilute the readers' dislike of her. Moreover, it does not account for a large proportion of the plot, and it does not really block the male and female protagonists as unscrupulously as in this article. Moreover, it is not a main character at all, so it does not leave a deep impression on readers and does not generate much disgust. It's just a small twist and conflict in the plot, and it won't become a big deal. The author probably describes the positioning between 3-4. Then I simply thought about it, and on the premise of retaining the three-no fighting maid, it can be set like this: at first, the maid thought that the male protagonist was a remnant of the Demon King because she had seen him working in the Demon King's Castle, and had no good intentions towards the female protagonist, but she couldn't beat her, so she was very embarrassed when they first met. After the male protagonist treated the old housekeeper that day, he specifically expressed his apology and thanks to the male protagonist, but he was still wary. After expressing his concerns to the female protagonist, he learned the male protagonist's identity, but he was still worried that the male protagonist was just greedy for the female protagonist's body, and he was also afraid that the female protagonist would lose the connection with God if her body was broken for a while. The hero and heroine are never allowed to be alone together. This will make people feel much more comfortable In short, I feel that many authors now think of a very interesting plot first, and then let the characters act out the plot, instead of thinking about the character settings first, and then let the plot be performed according to the characters. However, written works are different from film and television works. The divisions and contradictions in the text will be particularly obvious, and the information transmission of the text is much more difficult than that of the image. Although the author probably won't write too much about this character, I hope that the author can continue to polish his writing skills and become a great master.

The author must have read "As a Demon, I Want to Confess to the Cute Girl from the Brave Squad". It's full of a sense of déjà vu.

Come on, big brother who likes saints

The heroine is great, but I'm a white-haired person, so... I'm going to build a sister building. If you like my sister, please come 😏

It has the feel of an anime, but the arrangement is not very good, and the protagonist is even more of a licker. The character feels like a suture of re0's Sebastian Invincible and the male protagonists of Hori and Miyamura.

This one is okay

Hey hey

The protagonist's situation at work and at school.

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Asking for refinement

Actually, I think this picture is good

I miss you, old fish. It is better to dream in this gentle countryside than to struggle in society.

The routines in the early stage are too old and too old, and it looks like urban literature wearing a skin?