The War of Resistance Begins with the Pretenders

Among the pretenders, Wang Tianfeng forcibly brought Mingtai to the military training camp because Mingtai's special identity and background was to allow Mingtai to implement the Death Plan. For this reason, he did not hesitate to conflict with Ming Lou (or even become an enemy) Even if the protagonist became an elite in the military training camp, he was just a rookie second lieutenant or at most a lieutenant. There was no way he could become the core executor of the Death Plan.

The author can't just write a book for his own pleasure. Reasonable logic is also very important. I rather like this subject, but after reading Chapter 20, I couldn't help but get angry.

I still feel that many of the plots are unreasonable, the descriptions are stiff, and the character creation is a bit awkward, especially the language and dialogue are too unrealistic. Looking at the weapons and equipment and battle scenes, it feels very much like the style of a dramatist. I would like to give you a suggestion: dig into the character's psychology and the connection between identity, position, and environment. It is best to learn how to write emotional scenes and apply them appropriately in the text. Without appropriate emotional scenes, it will not look good 😐.

This introduction is poisonous! Spy War, he was still a student of Wang Tianfeng, but in the end, there was a person who became famous all over the world, and he was desperate for his life. He was a spy agent who lived in the dark. You became famous all over the world, and he was immediately persuaded to quit.

Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to write a running account for readers. Thank you!

A pig's trotter is still an agent, pushing recklessly all the way. Is this Rambo? The plot is not smooth and reasonable. I suggest the author straighten it out.

It's a bit confusing to write. The main character acted too hastily. Talk about everything to the outside world. It's simply not necessary. It seems that the protagonist's structure is very low

The spy genre, I thought it was just the beginning, but now it feels like it's the peak

It's better for an agent to remain unknown. Being famous all over the world means he can't die quickly enough.

You just have to stand on the Pearl Tower and shout that I am a time traveler.

Armored soldiers at the beginning, you are a time traveler, wouldn't it be good to stay in Sun Liren's armored regiment? If you don't do your job and become a spy, is that professional?

He died from the poison, not to mention using grenades all day long, but he also sneaked into the lieutenant general's side and said he didn't want it? What is the concept of Lieutenant General? Matsui Iwane is only a general

Are you an agent and famous all over the world? Are you sure you're not looking for death?

The protagonist is an agent, right? I always feel like the Punisher, rushing all the way!

This is one of the most poisonous books in the world. It's full of logical errors. It's embarrassing as hell. It's so mindless.

I didn't last until three pictures. Author, you are writing an essay! 😃

This is an anti-Japanese drama! It's so fast for the system to directly send out a few atomic bombs, but it's so boring to send grenades and submachine guns.

I've read more than 20 chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I'm a self-motivated author.

How can I say this? Yan Shuangying wouldn't dare to be so arrogant. He would attack dozens of them at every turn and suppress them with firepower. The system flow can do whatever he wants. Moreover, the plot twist is too abrupt and lacks foreshadowing. The protagonist gives people the impression that his IQ and force are all-round to crush everything, and the highlights of the supporting characters are not reflected at all. If it is an occasional highlight, it is not bad, but if it continues to be like this, it will create a sense of disgust. In short, I hope the author can tidy up and revise it a little, so that he can write better and better.

Holy mother, show off and be an agent.

Are there any other fans of Pretender? Please!

Except for the main character, none of them have IQ, speechless😓

Isn't this the protagonist of a heat-resistant drama? It's outrageous.

How can such literary talents be written? After all, it is the author. This brain is not just a boast.

It takes a lot of IQ to write a book like this. Taking a gun from the system openly, what kind of intelligence do you have, and as an agent, is it really good to be so high-profile?

Poison is poison, it's pretty cool, there's a system in place

Just rely on the system to show off and catch spies. The system will give you all the information clearly, and then the protagonist will do it directly without considering the reality and logic at all.

Pretender version of Yan Shuangying! 🤭

I haven't read the novel yet, but the synopsis is shocking to me. The armored company commander becomes an agent?

Book owner, let me borrow a precious place to promote my book, thank you. New book: I pursue heroines in the film and television world. The stock of manuscripts is large and the management is full. Investment is welcome. Now write about the world of pretenders.