Bright Sword Military Industry System

You have more experience than Li Yunlong and the commander. I can understand giving them advice, but when the infantry combat command requires you to give pointers, Li Yunlong has lived in the belly of a dog. It can be said that the good side of Li Yunlong was not mentioned at all. On the contrary, he was vulgar and took advantage of small and big advantages. How did he become the leader of the regiment with such a senseless mind. Later, even the chief was like this. Well, Xiao Dongbei was right. They all became yes men. What about your military industry system?

I read a book review of the completed novel before, and combined with this chapter, I felt that Soldier's work was a good one. There are always some self-limiting plot bugs that soldiers know about but are very difficult to deal with. For example, the problem of promotion of the protagonist, such as the problem of plot advancement. The former one is fine, but the latter one is probably laziness? The plot advances too naturally, the rhythm is too fixed, and the protagonist is too smooth. Like a ferry sailing directly, you can know the destination at a glance. Maybe it's mainly due to checking too much information about later generations, and unconsciously arranging the plot from a God's perspective, But this makes it easy for readers to guess the subsequent plot, and it is not Hi enough. This may also be the reason why there is not much to say in this chapter. The plot is too smooth and the writing is good, and there is no chance to complain and make fun of it. Suggestions; 👉Add some daily life, allowing readers to immerse themselves in the era and the background of the work, and also adjust the rhythm and tension of the plot. 👉The background of the character can be more complex to make him closer to the reader and reflect the commonality of the reader. For example, mercenaries? Militia? Retirement? Hunter? It is completely understandable that these people cannot be promoted. In addition, for the protagonist, promotion is not the biggest goal, glory is the highest pursuit. 👉Wars and military journeys are sudden. The author can arrange the plot, but he should not let the low-level protagonist do plot advancement that is not consistent with his identity. 👉 To put it bluntly, nothingness, history, should not and should not be written. It is left to a "wise and powerful" and "perfect man who makes no mistakes" to improve history. The protagonist only needs to do one thing well, carry the reader on his back, and experience, see and act on behalf of the reader.

Plots often feature enemies making mistakes and getting lucky, and the protagonist, who is thousands of miles away, reacts to the command immediately. How about writing about frontline commanders and fighters who are sharp and courageous! Written about bright swords, not war chess. The First Army was built by experienced commanders and fighters at all levels, not by the micro-management of the commander-in-chief! It is awkward for the protagonist to take charge of the overall situation, and the game of local battlefields is also unfolded. But Prime Minister Zhuge of the Three Kingdoms is not exhaustive and comprehensive The protagonist wants to reflect his existence in the plot, can Care in advance You can show the part through personnel composition, It can provide a situation perspective But please don't take chances, don't micro-manage, and don't add settings When writing about luck, micro-management, and related settings, please lay the groundwork in advance! When the plot unfolds, don't directly add spoiler-like explanations. You can point it out through the post-event summary! I feel that the writing style has not improved much, but the plot design is okay. In previous works, the perspective of the protagonist struggling on the front line, and the heart-wrenching reality at the end of the plot made people cry

The facial makeup is too serious, which extremes Li Yunlong's character traits, and every time the plot advances, it is exactly the same. The three-three system is advanced once, the rocket launcher is once, and the rocket launcher is once. Each time it strengthens the impression of being a "dog face", which makes me tired and disgusted with this character. After reading other comments, I concluded that the author's historical perspective is wrong. Whether it is the evolution of tactics or the iteration of equipment, it is true that the time traveler has a vision beyond the times. However, the description of other characters as tool men or exaggeration machines seems to be very demoralizing. Others can't do anything. The most obvious one is the role of "Chief of Staff", so that I am speechless how to put him in the role of Chief of Staff at this level. The most outrageous thing is that the author clearly knows where the problem is. The biggest impression on me is the few chapters of reflection and mental journey. But there are still problems later, including but not limited to: the writing method chooses to describe the development of things in large quantities, and there is a very lack of sense of substitution. (I have always felt tired of reading many online articles but I don't know what the problem is, but I can't sum up the reasons for the ones I like to read. I only understand the problem after reading the author's reflection) The best thing to watch is the fight between Li Yunlong and Zhang Wanhe in the early stage. It can be seen that they have put a lot of effort into it, but when I saw the Battle of Zhongtiao Mountain later, I no longer had this amazing feeling. Anyway, I would like to thank the author for setting a good example. It is very rewarding to learn from it.

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I have a question, what is the timeline in the book? Did the Soviet-German War and the Pacific War start? How long will it take?

The Japanese really don't retract their bullets in a war. You have all been deceived by movies and TV shows for too long. There is a turning button behind the 38-inch cover. Twist the safety and you won't be able to pull the trigger. Isn't it funny to retract bullets so stupidly? Also, the Sanba Gaigai is a bolt-action rifle. Just don't pull the bolt. What kind of bullets should I withdraw? Waste of time. With that kind of effort, I can already shoot a few rounds. Japanese people are not stupid😥. The reality is not. The national troops ran out of ammunition and food and rushed out to fight with bayonets. The Japanese politely removed the bullets. Rather. When national soldiers rush out, they will be fired upon by the Japanese 😥

Ahem, good brothers, I'm here to spray. I just want to know about germ warfare? And what about the Tegakome Agency? Fighting with you so seriously? This doesn't fit Xiaori's logic...

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In the TV series, Li Yunlong attacks Ping'an County. The two-knife translator at the headquarters who tapped the phone can only understand one Ping'an County. Would someone like the protagonist, who can even speak Japanese dialect, stay in the Independent Regiment? Does the Independent Regiment have a staff from the Ministry of Enemy Industry? If assigned by a superior, Li Yunlong would be shot if he kept talking?

Let me show you two unpopular Japanese tanks. You can't even search for these two tanks. Absolutely amazing Japanese tanks 1: Force-type machine gun vehicle 2: Fancy simple tank Not to mention the force-type, a driver can only do this by squatting like a small horse. This tank is as tall as a Japanese, only reaching the height of a Japanese waist. Fancy tanks and weirdos use the same method of two people pedaling bicycles to provide power. And it's only four millimeters. You can't even fire a rifle straight at it. If the force formula is too small. That pattern is too light

I think the author's portrayal of Li Yunlong is very vivid and lifelike. It can be seen from this that the author has read The Sword N times. In order to write this book well, it is normal to read The Sword N times. I am just a reader who likes the works of expeditionary soldiers. Only the works of expeditionary soldiers I read every word carefully, even if it is just the beginning. There are also works by other authors that I like, but I don't read every word. All about Expeditionary Soldiers

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I just read a little bit, and I have something to say about the author who may not have read it. After reading so many Liangjian fans, this book is indeed well written. The only thing he wanted was for Li Yunlong to get a good ending, and to persuade Li Yunlong in the name of his old subordinate. If the novel will be written after the Liberation War instead of just telling the story of Li Yunlong during the war years, that would be my greatest joy. I believe that the author's level, if written to that point, will be comparable to the dozens of chapters I have seen. The market for Liangjian fanfics is only big enough for a few authors to make money, but based on my more than ten years of online writing experience, I believe this book has a place, and I very much hope that the author can write Qidian's first Liangjian fanfiction with outstanding style (don't blame me for boasting, the Liangjian fanfics in Qidian are firstly few, secondly poisonous, and thirdly have congenital disabilities).

No matter how good you say it is, I watched it over and over again, and every time I saw the protagonist go to the battlefield, I couldn't stand it. At that time, the protagonist was equivalent to Mr. Qian Xuesen. We can't force the plot to kill. At that time, military personnel were so scarce, how could they be wasted on the front line of the battlefield, even if they had the halo of being the protagonist?

The protagonists of the soldier novels of all generations have shown one characteristic: anti-war. After the protagonist becomes famous, he modestly says that he just wants to live when he is admired by others This plot is especially common in the decisive battles of Desan and 1941. The soldier is simply a repeater in this part But in this book, can the soldier change this writing method? There has been a plot in this book where the protagonist said that he just wants to live. In contrast, Of course it is correct to fight, but China's Eighth Route Army, China's Workers' and Peasants' Red Army, they are the revolutionary army of the Chinese people. China is fighting a revolutionary war. Are these European and American wolves and beasts who have only fought aggressive wars and are full of imperialism worthy of being compared with the soldiers? For me personally, I hope to see a revolutionary warrior, not a Chinese limited edition Western confused soldier

I found that there is a problem in writing anti-Japanese novels. It seems that there is no reward for the pig's trotters for meritorious service or great merit. There should be a certificate. Don't just talk about it. For meritorious service, you should be given a certificate or a military medal. At that time, if conditions were not good, there were also handwritten certificates.

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Brother soldier, you can also develop a simple version of the rocket launcher powered by horsepower. It has a six-tube mode with three upper and three lower tubes. It is usually not loaded with ammunition and is light in weight. It can be launched using a thickened wooden wheel cart as a carrier. Arrive at the launch site, fix it with steel nails, then reload and connect to the reserved power interface. Multiple simple launch vehicles, as long as the density is high, can also achieve the effect of Katyusha. And it is less dependent on road surfaces, cars and gasoline. More suitable for use by mountain troops.

Dear friends, do you have any recommendations for novels about being the boss during the Anti-Japanese War and changing the direction of history? No main theme is needed, it can be the 404 version, please.

In order to show off the protagonist, other characters are too smart. As a time traveler, you can only come up with some ideas and rough methods at most. You are in contact with the elites of that era, and the intelligence of all of them is not as good as yours. 😰 A plan drawn up by the general staff, but you overturn it with low-level mistakes after just one glance. Li Yunlong is so good at fighting, but here he becomes a loser who can only yell. Can't stand it

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