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The villain is right, the protagonist is an idiot

It's pretty, but it's not suitable for humans to see.

The first chapter at the beginning is so poisonous, it made me laugh to death, haha, childish white text

This author's routine is wrong. Even if he wants to innovate, he shouldn't write it like this. First of all, it's wrong in the first few chapters. After the protagonist has just obtained the system to save his sister, he knows that her sister will be taken away, but he still doesn't reveal his strength to let them see his talent. He also says that his power is inherited. This is very outrageous. Most importantly, any principal of TM is not the best in cultivation than the students. And in the chapters where the protagonist is saving his sister, aren't there mentions of the god-making plan? Even if the protagonist has nothing to do with the world, he still has to work hard to expose his strength for the sake of the protagonist's sister. As a time traveler, wouldn't the protagonist be unable to think of something like my cultivation is the result of my own talent? After saying that Pig's Foot didn't know how high his cultivation level was at that time, breaking out of his strength was the best choice at that time. The protagonist's performance later in your writing proves that Pig's Foot still hopes to be with his sister. So as long as Pig's Foot explodes with his strength at that time, he may be very happy to go to school with the protagonist's sister. The most incomprehensible thing to me is that the protagonist also worships a local as his teacher. Even if he does not have super high cultivation, this situation should not happen to the protagonist in the early stage. I have been waiting for the system to prove that Pigfoot will not become a disciple. This is because the protagonist is a time traveler, so Pigfoot should know that the system gives the protagonist more and better quality than what the teacher teaches. When I read these chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. When I read the comments, I also saw someone saying that the protagonist also became a dog licker. This is the last thing that should happen in this novel. Because in the later stage, the protagonist will not expose his strength in front of the people he trusts most and let them tell the protagonist what state he is in? And since the woman already suspected the pig's feet, why couldn't she try it out? His IQ was crushed below zero. He wrote this book first and he can still read it, but the writing is so illogical. No wonder he didn't sign a contract. The author let himself go and wrote whatever he wanted.

It's not a matter of writing style anymore, this plot is so poisonous, you have the cultivation level of a great emperor but you still have to hide it and say that someone else borrowed it. There is also a problem with the girl in yellow. Good guy, she knows the protagonist's strength and directly questions the protagonist. It doesn't seem like she has lost her mind.

Brother, please practice your writing. What the hell are you writing? The preface does not match the subtitle. You are a primary school student.

The introduction is so poisonous, why did you click on it to read it? Can I read this book with an introduction from 20 years ago?

There is really no logic at all, and it can dance better than a primary school student. Even primary school students can write better than this.

The human body cannot be cultivated? Why did Nuwa create humans? Why do animals need to transform into immortals? Why are the gods in the sky all human beings and not monsters? Why is the author who writes the book a human being and not a stone or a plant or an animal?

He died from a poisonous attack. The plot was forced into the plot and the pig's feet lived in vain.

Are you interested in making sweet food? No wonder no one is watching.

The novel is good, but it is not suitable for people to read.

What you wrote is even liked by women, but what the hell are you writing?

Fellow Taoists, please leave quickly. Don't stay here for long.

The subject matter is very good, but why do I get more and more upset the more I read it? Default wife... I'm not in the mood now that my sister is gone!

The plot was okay, but the Eye of the True God in the later stages put me off. What a pity

What you wrote is so messed up, you even used your cell phone to talk on the phone after traveling through time.

I'm speechless. In fact, this novel can be completed in one chapter.