This Superstar Likes to Challenge the Limits

The subject matter is very good, but the plot design is all poisonous and budding. She is green at the beginning. You can just beat her up. She will fall unconscious after jumping off the building and break her leg. She is a coward.

The beginning is very toxic, the protagonist's girlfriend cheated on him and broke up with him, the protagonist disagreed, the protagonist's system made him jump off the building, disgusting stuff

The top experts in extreme sports are all sponsored, right? What's the point of spending their own money to buy equipment? It's too expensive.

Coming from Earthy Superstar, let's save it first.

This is an old eunuch, so be careful when reading. The author comes to the palace at any time

Write a song on the spot and die on the spot

Chapter 3 of persuading you to quit is full of poisonous points. Farewell!

I read the comments and read the first chapter. It was the original owner. There is nothing poisonous about it, but the system immediately issued a task to jump from the 2nd floor. The protagonist actually jumped. The protagonist never told me that he knew parkour, and he yelled about which supporting characters he didn't like. This is the poisonous point. The most important thing is that jumping from the 2nd floor will kill people. If you jump in the wrong place, you will hit GG and break your legs. Or is it light? Does the protagonist want to die just after crossing over? The author really recommends that you rewrite the first chapter. The author's title is quite interesting, otherwise I wouldn't have read the first chapter and posted a comment.

Novels with the beginnings of superstars have become popular again. I've seen them frequently recently. This one will also become popular.

Came in excitement, expected too much, left disappointed

I wonder why it's so difficult to find a novel with an online brain

The beginning is indeed a bad one. Later on, I was liked by many girls, and even two lolita. Well, this is a cool article. Author, how much do you like lolita? Here are two at once.

The system does not provide automatic shooting drones and background music, which is too low.

Are you imitating a big player with elbow?