Lol: Me! Return to the Professional Arena

I couldn't bear to read it, so I couldn't help but write a book review. The dialogue is like child's play, there is basically no characterization skills, and the writing feels like a puppet. The plot is like a running account, and the key point is that it is really a running account, without any embellishments, and basically uninteresting. In terms of cause and effect, I only see the effect and very few causes. In other words, the given cause cannot explain the effect. For example, can listing a string of data show that it is very strong? This book is basically a writing practice. For the next book, I suggest you write a mind map first. Character relationships, character descriptions, plot flow, and action logic must be clarified first.

This cousin didn't even know that he had appeared forcibly, and as soon as he appeared, he covered the protagonist's eyes with his hands? Lower IQ? ? ? Abandon your writing. Even Shennong can't stand your embarrassing writing.

You S7 Pantheon, give me a free Q and let me see. If you are a level 1 vampire, Pantheon is half-blooded. If you are a vampire and still has half-blood, you will be considered successful.

I got a cousin whom I haven't met before, wouldn't I ask my family members to verify it as soon as possible? Unless the protagonist is an orphan

Am I the first one here? !

This version is really confusing😥😥😥

When will the new book be released?

I read a lot of novels, why do the authors write that the protagonist is handsome, not just ordinary handsome, but extraordinary handsome, and the handsomeness of the protagonist is introduced every few chapters. As long as a woman meets the male protagonist, she will be fascinated by it, which makes me feel as if the author has never seen a woman before, especially in entertainment and competition writing.

All LOL articles have one characteristic, which is to forcibly expand the influence of this game. No matter how awesome you are, you are just a small hot spot, and it is disgusting to attract the attention of the entire Internet. All game articles should emphasize that the protagonist is handsome! Goodbye

I don't play League of Legends. Look at that data, why is it so awkward? Diamond starts, 100 wins in a row. A talented person with more than 1,200 points? Anyone who plays League of Legends can enlighten me.

I wonder if the author has played League of Legends? The middle lane is only level 2 in the first 5 minutes?

The author didn't play this game! Or a noob! Putting aside the writing skills, this kind of LPL writing requires a lot of skills, after all, the readers are all LPL players.

It's so awesome, the cool article makes me so happy 😒

The whole group or something, just chatting or supervising you if you have nothing to do

The good guys are the same

Which version are you writing here? The S9 version of Pantheon came to you, so why did it come out for the S7?

Come on, author. It's normal for newcomers to have some flaws. Just read it and that's it. I don't even know how to write if you ask me. Haha, come on. Monthly tickets are available.