The Eight Extremes of Gods and Ghosts

Collect, comment, give it a try, good article, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง.

I think it would be more interesting if it were written as a Shinto text.

There are many such books. It depends on whether the plot is interesting.

Overall, it's above the standard. Come on, come on.

If you start with magic, it is a good possibility. After all, you are a mountain god.

2W for 3 days, boss level

The golden finger of Shanshen is quite good, and it feels quite comfortable after looking at it from the front. It's just that some of the descriptions and character creation are a bit naive. As for the plot advancement, it is too slow. Each chapter has a common sense chapter (perhaps, it is to introduce the environment and the medicinal value of soft-shelled turtles). I would like to give you a suggestion. Don't write too much in the first seven or eight chapters. Just describe it briefly. Focus on the seal of the mountain god and the conflict between the protagonist. It would be a bit far-fetched for a young gangster to go to his classmates to practice martial arts, as if he would only learn martial arts after being beaten. You know, we have golden fingers! The plot can be modified as follows: After activating the Mountain God Seal, he remembered that his classmate was from a martial arts family, so he went to visit and practice the exercises. During the trip, he happened to meet people from other martial arts families who came to play in the restaurant. The protagonist can then come on stage. (I haven't seen the back part yet, so if the plot is really like this, I don't think I mentioned it~) It is also necessary to create conflicts! If the plot in the previous chapters develops faster, some descriptions are changed, and we go straight to the theme, I think we can make great progress! You can find some big guys or join a group to communicate and communicate. There is still something remarkable in the first few chapters! Come on~ Look forward to visiting again