Overthrowing the Dynasty Begins with an Undercover Agent

One thing to say, the author, your writing is still very good, but it is too licky. Today's readers rarely see the protagonist as a dog licker. Before I encountered Kongqing, I thought your novel would be very popular even if it was not a big hit. I hope that you, the author, can change it in the future and use betrayal to make the protagonist give up. Come on, author

When did the protagonist kill Kong Qing?

I thought I was going to write about the people's desperation, but instead I ended up reading about the story of how a dog licks a dog.

After reading Chapter 4, I started to poison myself. . You've traveled through time, don't you believe in ghosts and gods? It's okay to say so reluctantly, after all, there are historical time travel stories and urban time travel stories. But you have practiced internal strength yourself, and you still believe in it?

As I write it, it becomes a romance novel. . Embarrassing 😓

The protagonist doesn't have much brains, he's just reckless, he doesn't have a good head, he fell into a trap obviously, he's so stupid.

I really don't understand why the author wrote the protagonist as a dog-licker and a brain-destroyer

The framework is good, and no poisonous points have been found so far. The writing style is what I like. There are just a few updates, and the chapters themselves don't have many words.

I don't have much desire to read the story.

So pretty! Hurry up and update, we will update 100 chapters in one day.

I think the focus of this book should be to add some intelligence to the pig's feet, followed by the exercises. Ever since I met Kong Qing, I have been thinking about it. I don't understand what the author is trying to express?

Beat that Kong Qing to death, and kill everyone who poses a threat! Die die die

The emotional scene is so embarrassing. The protagonist is a modern person. Why is it written in such a silly way? Also, Kong Qing's character is considered to be very capable of making plans, and her intelligence is also excellent, but what about her behavior?

Experience is too complicated, keep it simple

Discuss with the editor whether the category can be changed. History is better than martial arts.

Please author not to cut 😭, the only good book is gone again

The protagonist didn't do anything chivalrous and righteous, but he just killed someone so how could he be righteous?

Since the ending is going to be bad, write the male protagonist to death

Did you see a chivalrous value in Chapter 6? Why do you just hang up and get some chivalry points? Nondescript! If you want to eliminate the negative effects, you can just use the number of idle days to solve it!

? ? ? ? ? Give it a try, I think the writing in the front is very good, I feel quite comfortable as I read it, but the IQ in the back is not online, why would you go to someone else's base camp if you are a person with three no skills? A woman gives you top-notch martial arts all at once. Is she stupid? Anyone with intelligence can just hold the sword up to her. If she wants the secret book, it will still cost her life. You don't want to bet on her kindness. You just didn't read the rest. I can't stand it any longer. Say goodbye. Excuse me! ! ! ! ! ! !

The recommendation vote has been cast, and {"NickName":"Big Meow Let's Go","UserId":186256111} has also been added to the bookshelf. Can you search and follow it on Douyin and recommend the book list?

It's a pity that the update speed can't be improved, otherwise I wouldn't be able to be recommended and gain popularity.

The main line is a bit off. I have many ideas but lack of experience, so I can't control it well. It is recommended to cut the plot and return to the original main line. It is not recommended to prepare for the next book directly. I have written short stories on other platforms, and I also know some niche authors who write out of hobby. It is very sad when the first work fails, and it will have a great psychological impact on the second one, making you want to give up, be extremely sensitive, or be cautious and fearful of repeating the failure of the first one. In fact, I strongly recommend that you continue writing the first book, not to write anything, but to "put the knife on the knife" and "start the pot" to write for the success of your second book. Many excellent writers, even if their first book is full of poisonous points, will become mature in their writing later on. Because the first one is for beginners, no matter how crooked it is, you still need to practice it, so that your subsequent skills will not be crooked. The first book has just started. If you abandon the book because it collapsed while writing it, what will happen if the second one collapses again? If every author has to go through 10 big mistakes to grow, then try to make all the mistakes in the first book. Otherwise, no one can continue writing after ten books have failed (well, there are some exceptions for some writers, really King TJ). If you don't practice with the first book, are you going to practice with the second one? After writing the entire book, even if you can identify six or seven major poisonous points, it is equivalent to stepping on a thunderbolt. Otherwise, how would you know where your shortcomings are? I have played drumming and passing flowers writing. As long as you don't criticize yourself, writing is easy. If you can't control your emotional lines well, you should follow Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu's example and break up! The heroine was recommended to be the concubine of the Dog Emperor, and then escaped with the help of Lord Du (overseas fairy island, hidden sect, Baidu Mountain, snowy mountain, desert, whatever). After the writing failed, the uncontrollable parts were "soft cut", which is what many great authors do. There are many people who simply traveled through the world twice after writing it. You don't need unlimited lives to explore the entire BOSS first. How can you clear the next game in one life?

Updates are too slow, otherwise the last wave of recommendations by editors would still be popular.

I think the writing was pretty good, maybe they didn't think it was cool enough.