My Apprentices Are All Alien Species

It's so confusing, the main plot is not clear, and I feel that the main character is not like the main character, the supporting characters are completely supporting characters, and the tone of speech is similar, there is no sharp contrast in personality, the main focus, that is, what everyone values ​​​​is not written, it is as if everyone is cut out of a mold, without any habits, any exclusive actions, bland and densely packed with articles. Also, do you want to change the title of the book? I always feel like I am watching cctv Discovery Channel 🤭

The votes have been cast, what about the update 🤓

After the new writing, the writing style has declined, but the plot has definitely improved. At least in the first picture, I could clearly understand what He Jiuxiao wanted to do. (Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I read the first edition.) But there is indeed progress. Come on.

With so many votes, why can't I sign an appointment?

The writing is quite fluent, and the intensity of the duel can be revealed in the plain words, but the number of words is a bit short at the moment hh needs to be maintained. Come on~ Look forward to visiting again

Support it! ! ! Very good novel

Your writing skills are absolutely top-notch, but after reading three chapters, I don't know what story you're telling? Or what is the main line? The three chapters are more than 10,000 words. I feel like I am reading classical Chinese. The characters appear so that I don't know who is who? For example, a teaching assistant didn't know his gender at first, but it took him a long time to figure it out, and he didn't know the assistant's name until later. Personally, I don't think it should be like this.

Sharp, sharp, I can see it all derle😁😁

1. The first chapter is too long and makes reading uncomfortable 2. The writing is too good, but it is complicated 3. The plot is just okay, but not enough 4. Keep working hard

I have been voting silently for several days, so cheers and support you unswervingly.

The beginning is very interesting. It directly introduces the background of the world in the form of a lecture, but it is not too long-winded. Like it and like it.

? )? `I think it's pretty good-looking and the plot is good (*?′╰╯`?)?

Come, come, let's take it in each other's way?

Is there any more today? Tangled. Wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait.

The plot is rich and coherent, and readers can completely follow the author's thinking, which is very good.

Come on╮(￣▽￣)╭Newcomers, look at me, you will be motivated

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Alien species? The uglier the more powerful

Reminds me of Alien💀💀💀

You can't even raise 100,000 yuan to apply for a visa?

Suddenly a eunuch 😰

Why is it over? 😭 Come on💪Hold on✊