After I Got Married, I Started Checking in Every Day

At the beginning, it is said that the male protagonist has been among thousands of flowers in his previous life, and every leaf has been touched. And then he fell into a daze after being kissed by the heroine? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? No wonder no one reads it. The character you wrote will be overthrown by yourself.

It's good, but there are too many typos.

There are too many typos, and there is not much sense of substitution. When friends say that the heroine is an "old woman", they will think she is a silly girl.

Actually, I don't want to say anything else. I just saw what Mother Qiao said and got angry. I mean you can't even say that your daughter is wrong! Moreover, the male protagonist is still an orphan. I personally feel that when you get married, you have two families, and the two complement each other. Nowadays, when writing books, boys cook and do housework, so they are good men! That girl is just as beautiful as a flower, so she can just lie down? I really can't understand it! I have a brother whose parents died early in an accident, but he was very successful and earned a share of the family business at the age of 26! After getting married, he would read books and do housework every day even if he had no shortage of money. His wife did nothing but play and win! As a result, the woman cheated and got divorced! The woman's reason is that her husband is too nice and she is too idle, so she just looks for excitement when she is bored! I was shocked! Now my brother is married again, but he doesn't do any housework and just lets his current wife have something to do! There are children! Much more stable than before! So I think it makes sense for men to be outside and women to be inside!

Is this a typo? Not so many!

The biggest problem is that there are so many typos that it affects reading. It's hard for the author to go far

Too many typos! It is estimated that it was released in a hurry without review.

It makes me feel embarrassed. You don't play according to the routine. The plot arrangement is too unreasonable.

Those who write live broadcasts cannot watch them at all. The connotations of good live broadcasts written by others are actually about being funny and having a harem.

Seriously, there are so many typos! It's okay if you make one or two mistakes, but you are wrong from the beginning to the end. You were wrong at the beginning, but you are still wrong at the end.

It makes me sick to see these people pretending to be innocent. In today's society, what kind of monsters are we all?

Are you a eunuch? Why not update

Why don't you write it? It's a good novel. You can start charging chapters later.

Sorry guys, I didn't listen to your advice and clicked on. I feel like I'm not feeling well all day.

The plot of this book is very good. Typos don't affect the viewing. I don't understand why so many people can't stand typos. Do you all have to read the book with a magnifying glass?

Anyway, I feel good

I don't want to watch Shingo-ryu at all, he's just a useless protagonist who relies entirely on the system.

There are a lot of typos, but that doesn't mean this book is bad. Come on, author, I'll give you a 500 reward. Please check for typos every time you publish a new chapter! Please~😭

Since you choose to write a book, write it well. Please respect your choice and respect your readers. Don't correct a bunch of typos. It's really...

It's a disgusting novel, not manly at all.

The new book "Wealth Freedom Starts with a Lottery" This time I learned from all the mistakes I made before. No matter what the outcome of this book is, whether I sign the contract or not, I will finish it seriously. Anyone who is interested is welcome to come and taste it! Leave this post as proof: If I don't finish this book, I will live broadcast wearing black stockings and standing upside down to wash my hair (of course, I will insist on finishing it, so you will definitely not see it)