Under Closed Borders

If you have any suggestions, please leave a message, as long as it doesn't affect the ending of the outline. I will try my best to adopt it 😃

The opening name is a bit discouraging. . .

I only read the first chapter and haven't read it in detail yet. Overall, there is only one uncomfortable point: the word "dao" is used too frequently, which makes it a bit awkward. The rest of the words are okay. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Thirty million sword-wielding players must bend their backs when they meet me. The author uses simple but textured language to describe the gaming experience of the protagonist Jun Zicang. The plot is compact and exquisite, and you can see that the author wrote it carefully. Passionate and funny coexist, I love it.

Hurry up, please follow up on the blood letter

Clockwork Meaningless Seat Rushing Review: Sofa

The female supporting characters Yu Qing and Kalia have been out for a few chapters. Is it better for them to be included in the harem or Lily? Hehe(´▽｀)ノ♪

It's mutually beneficial, it's well written, cheers for the author.

Come on, it looks good.

Each chapter is too short, the writing style is barely okay, and the writing is average. The author has insufficient experience in this area and needs to read more novels of the same type to learn and learn from it.

The suggestions I made cannot be used in this book... The author Jun is interested in taking a look 1. The world view and story line must match the writing power. There are too many systems that cannot be controlled, just like a pure and refreshing article where you don't know the names of the first few women at the end 2. The power system needs to be more rigorous Another: The author Jun is so cute

If you are ready to invest, the author must finish the book!