Head of Konoha

In fact, I want to say that when I first saw the idea of ​​Naruto coming to the world, I felt amazing. I didn't expect it to be like this. But after thinking about it carefully, I realized that there is actually a big flaw, that is, ninjas, even if they reach the shadow level (I'm talking about Yuan Fei's Rizhan level), they still have high attack and low defense. One shot will still kill them. Why are ninjas promoted globally? There are only a few tailed beasts, and only a few jinchūriki. He may be the elite force of a country, or he may be the top force of all countries in the world, but ninjas should never be promoted globally, unless they want chakra technology like Naruto, everything is driven by chakra, but I remember that Naruto also has electrical appliances, and the technology tree is wrong for Naruto. Actually, it's not that I'm looking down on the author or anything. It's just that there was a book about Naruto coming to the world. I was actually looking forward to that book, but it ended up being too late, so I'm just posting some of my own opinions. You're not preaching to the author about writing a book or anything, but you're talking about some digressions. No matter which parallel time and space, if the florist promotes the profession of ninja across the country, I always feel I feel a little awkward The above are all my thoughts before I finished reading this book. Now I have finished reading it, so I would like to say please treat everything I said above as fart. I thought about the other two books about Naruto Advent, and the problem is that there are no enemies, no There is a main plot, and an earth in a parallel time and space, but the author found a different way and created a ninja federation (this is really strong, the problem was solved instantly), there is a common enemy - hell, and the huge benefits it brings (original stone (suddenly feeling like playing Genshin Impact)). But so far, the main plot is still not developed? In short, author nb! (Broken sound)

Ruthless is still as short and weak as ever

The subject matter is very fresh, but the story is too cliche and contains many poisonous points. I picked up a sister at the beginning. She was numbered and very strong, so there was something wrong with her at first glance. A young lady with a very annoying personality appeared and was slapped in the face for a while. The eldest lady fainted and didn't want to watch.

Why are you writing about a younger sister? Isn't it good to slowly become stronger?

I hope the protagonist can go to other dimensions and wander around.

It's really short for someone who works the night shift.

Cheers []~（￣▽￣）~*

Qingqing quickly establish the protagonist's identity, otherwise I won't be able to give gifts

Um, well, most of the people writing about Naruto coming to the world are eunuchs. Hey, come on, author.

The subject matter is quite good, but many things look very abrupt, such as the AK47, Kusanagi sword... The author seems not to have introduced how he got them. At any rate, the protagonist is a student, and he suddenly took out the AK47 while typing. It's so strange.

Xiaobai's article If you don't have any brains, you can read it I have read other reasonable and rigorous books, but reading this will cause you to die.

So white. . People write fanfics for adults, but you think they are for children