My Disciples Are so Filial

The writing is sophisticated and the driving is smooth. Driving is everywhere in the whole novel, driving openly and covertly, all of which are unexpected driving plots. In addition to these, the social and death plots are also well arranged. The plot of the novel has a good sense of immersion. There is only one case, and the content and overall situation behind it are already looming. Men and women The portrait description, dialogue description, and environmental description of the protagonist are also very detailed, but the description of details can be strengthened, and the inner monologue and activities of the characters should be added appropriately. Generally speaking, the writing style is mature, and it can be seen that the author is very careful and has the potential to become a hit. As long as the plot does not jump and the sense of suspense is enhanced, the whole book will be more perfect.

Well boy, that's it. . .

I think we should set a moderate level of cultivation for the protagonist, at least start with foundation building! Also, how did the protagonist's master die?

Tips from the front row. This book is a harem. I know that readers of harem novels have a lot of mysophobia, and I will try to avoid those poisonous points. For example, mask flow or something. The protagonist of this book disguises himself at the beginning, not to be disgusting, but to serve the plot later. I don't want everyone in the book to know that the protagonist is a peerless expert. He must be given a layer of skin so that the book will not collapse easily. When the protagonist's cultivation level rises later, he won't need that layer of skin. Also, as for the heroine, I will take my time to write it. Adding too many heroines will make it difficult for me. If I want to write a heroine with different personalities, I have to take my time. I'm sorry. Except for the first disciple of the protagonist, who is male, the rest are all female disciples. The purpose of recruiting a disciple is to create a clown. The clown is Ling Feifan. Don't worry, he will not have any feelings with other female disciples. Some of them are just normal friendships between brothers and sisters. This book needs to be written slowly and interestingly, so the pace and updates will inevitably be slow. I'm so sorry, I want to write a spiritual book. Later, if there is a chance to put it on the shelves, there will be more updates.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I understand the truth, but it was too difficult for me to read three chapters for ten minutes before investing (although I still finished the ten minutes in the end)

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Recommended new book "Buddha has no form" 😁

To be honest, your name always reminds me of that German orthopedic surgeon.

I'll go, there are so few, I'll read it after at least a hundred chapters, come on.

How much does the author reward himself? Thousands of dollars, right?

Spring, this is the season of mating of all things

What about the new book? I'm urging you to write a new book 🙂

With just over 50,000 words, Xiaorong recommended it a bit early. Let's add it to the bookshelf first.

First class every day. Worship the boss!

You should write less interactive dialogue between characters and more psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions, otherwise it will read like a running account! !

I've read a few chapters and overall it's very irritating.

Nowadays, the relaxed and funny style is popular, and the traditional fairy tale is in decline 😭