World Two

Becoming a Shennong again, the more you chew the grass, the more poisonous it becomes The plot is very good, except for the background of the protagonist in the introduction, and then the author has no idea what he is talking about. The things the characters do have unclear meanings, and a lot of writing is used to write about people other than the protagonist, but it seems that there is no feeling of "living" them at all Poison point: A group of relatively "elite" children will go to a school to compete with foreign races. Where you get the "Book of Heaven", you end up training on some philosophical issues. With the same 15 Deadpools eating the same resources, how can these 15 students be better than those 15 people? Philosophy can sublimate your spirit and figure out some things, but it can't solve things. In front of Deadpool, who doesn't need to think through his mind at all, even if you realize something, 15 of you can accomplish those goals better than 15 of them? Well, if Deadpool is ready, and the protagonist and the 15 of them are just practicing by the way, that makes sense. But aren't the first 35 chapters too boring? The whole book is full of "grievance"? I didn't see a few normal people. Although they are all 15 years old, there are always people who know what they should do and won't be confused, right? None of the 15 people know what they are doing. They have been hesitating for such a simple question for a long time. Can't you just finish it when you see what the mission is? The higher-ups in the military camp are bullying you, so why don't you try to kill everyone except the 15 of you? The illusion used in the training has not erased the memory or anything like that, and the academy's exam does not require anything. He is just alive, and there is no guarantee that he will stay in the military camp. The whole book is very confusing. Is this a self-admiration article? I wrote it with no intention of showing it to others. The readers only use my own words?

I'm speechless🤭🤭🤭This is such a big idea😁😁😁

After reading it, I will update as soon as possible, waiting for it!

Why don't you sign the contract? The writing is beautiful

The writing is good, and even the opening chapter is good, but I just didn't want to spend time reading it, so I scanned the recommendation list and saw it. Fantasy Category Do you write fantasy? Although there are many fantasy academies. From a learning perspective, I can't seem to find anything wrong with this book. I just can't understand what I want to write without the title and introduction.

Great author, why did you stop updating? I'm so anxious~~

That is, hurry up and save some manuscripts when you are not busy, so that they can be put on the shelves. I support the author greatly.

Don't worry if you don't understand, just keep reading and you'll understand. It's divided into several stories and described from multiple perspectives. It's my first time to experience this kind of article. It's excellent! 👍

Nowadays, most of the books about cute babies who love immortals and travel through time are somewhat boring. Most of them are written the same way. This author's big book is very different. The more I read it, the more excited I am. I have to save a few chapters to read them together to make it more enjoyable. Come on, I will love you more if you keep reading ~ Come on, readers who read books every day like me, the more you read, the more excited you are~

Author, your spirit is worth learning from!

It's a bit messy, but if you read it patiently and carefully, you can connect the scattered plots together and it feels great to solve the puzzle on your own. The author is also a person with great perseverance, come on 👍

The storyline is quite attractive, I hope the author can take us into a different world.

Recommended by a friend, it's really extraordinary and just what I wanted. It's beautiful and I love watching it.

The plot is quite interesting and the setting is quite novel. It feels like you are entering the world of a novel. It is a good book.

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Faced with the fate of a choice, one has to take additional locks and refuse to accept fate's arrangements 😡

Checked it out, it's pretty good, looking forward to the follow-up

This is a very special fantasy novel at the beginning. It takes a light and slow-burning route as a whole. It doesn't make fun of you all the way. It's more like telling a story slowly.

The author's writing skills are quite solid. There are layers of details hidden in the plain narrative. The more you read, the more you can feel the tension in the characters' emotions.

The setting in the book is very novel, not cliche, full of freshness, and the content is very interesting.

This book is very good. Although it has flaws, the author writes well and is diligent. Good luck, author.

The overall reading is very smooth, the plot is not procrastinating, and it is suitable for relaxation and entertainment.

The writing style is delicate and classical, with a sense of Jiangnan atmosphere. It is not overwhelming to read, and it is very suitable for reading slowly and calmly. The supporting characters are also very vivid, and the relationships between the characters and the foreshadowing of the plot are very detailed.

The characterization is profound and the content is very thoughtful. I have saved it and look forward to updating it later.

It's a wonderful idea, but the quantity is a bit small. When will it be updated?

The writing is quite good, the pace is comfortable, the writing is okay, and the plot is not too bad. I just don't know why there are so few readers. I recommend it to those who haven't read it, and I recommend it more to those who have not seen it.

The ideas are novel and the ideas are clever, you can't get enough!

The plot is getting more and more exciting, I'm updating every day, come on!

The plot is great, and the character of the main character is also pretty good. I like this kind of thing. It's better not to accept fate.

I really like some of the settings in it, and I keep up with it every day. I will update it once in my lifetime!