New King of Lakers

The first point is that the system settings are not good and the experience cards are too unbalanced. Also, the speed of giving the full value directly is not good (considering that I am already 22 years old, it is not very poisonous) The second point is that if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less The third point is that the description of the game is not appealing enough I have read a few chapters and that's it for the time being. Good cheers for the author

It feels good. Some competitions don't need to be written in detail. (I feel like it's a little watery if it's too thin)

Check in here first, the recommendation tickets have been given away!

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them.