Tao and People

I came into contact with online writing quite late. Around 2015, by chance, I read the comic "Fights Break the Sphere" and then pursued the novel. It was the first time Xiaobai read an online article. It was so crazy. For more than a year, he basically forgot all about food and sleep. The various routines are so delicious. However, it didn't take long for me to find that I couldn't find books that suited my taste. I found books and forced myself to read them. The result was like a robot, mechanically scrolling through page after page without feeling a trace of happiness. Therefore, I took a break from reading online articles for about a year. During the Spring Festival of 2018, out of boredom, I accidentally clicked on "The Great Road Confrontation" written by a misguided person, and regained the original joy of reading a book. Later on, although I was no longer as crazy as when I first came into contact with online literature, I got used to opening a few of my favorite books on weekdays and traveling in a fantasy world. I thought about it for a long time and found that there is only one reason why I like to read online articles, and that is "coolness". In my opinion, "cool" is not just about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be a slap in the face, etc., But should include everything that can provide motivation for reading. Plots with wonderful settings and suspense can bring "exhilaration", such as "Lord of Mysteries". Compared with other content, what I like the most is the plot in which the entire world view is slowly revealed and the secrets in the fog of history are revealed. In the book, the protagonist can do some things that he cannot do in reality, such as flying to the sky and escaping from the earth, getting promoted and making a fortune, which is also a major source of pleasure. When I first came into contact with online writing, this was probably the most attractive thing to me. The same goes for humorous and interesting plots. The simplest and primitive happiness is naturally "cool". The reversal of the plot and the occurrence of unexpected things also attracted me to continue reading. Finding your ideal person in the article and living a happy life can also bring satisfaction. There are countless sources of "coolness", and everyone's pleasure points are even more numerous. In my definition, "cool" refers to any content that can bring motivation for reading. Therefore, the online articles I like to read are all enjoyable articles in my opinion. In daily life, when I am bored, I always have random thoughts, imagining that I can fly into the sky and do whatever I want. (YY is so good) Why not write a book yourself? Just do it. (No) Due to various reasons, I have been procrastinating for more than a year. During this period, I actually tried to write twice, but I couldn't stand what I wrote. This year is finally the official start of writing. I once read a lot of online articles and boasted: "This writing style can be written by a primary school student." However, when I started writing, I realized that writing for beginners is not that easy. When this book was uploaded, it already had tens of thousands of words. I had a pretty good idea of ​​the plot and the settings were quite rich. I can barely read it, but I don't know how you book friends feel. If there is something inappropriate in this new book, please point it out to fellow Taoists. I will accept the teachings with an open mind and reflect on it seriously. There are typos and so on, some of which I really can't find out myself. I hope you can forgive me and point out that I will correct them. Finally, I would like to make a request to fellow Taoists. I hope you will not apply the settings of other books into this book. In my opinion, unless it is a fan, the setting and world view of each book are unique. What is logical in this setting may not necessarily be true in another setting. Only by putting aside the inherent concepts can you read more happily. I won't say too much, but for a newbie like me, no one may read the text, let alone the work, haha. It's over now. Xiaoxian didn't wait any longer. He stood up and turned into a sword rainbow and shot through the air...

No CP. There is a cheat, which officially appears in Chapter 17. The cheat is related to the plot, not just for cheating. Have an outline. Double updates tentatively scheduled. Practice Taoism instead of cultivating immortality, because there is no immortal world. …… …… To be added.

It is not easy to grow a new book seedling, so I hope you will take good care of it.

Good book 👍 Highly recommended!

I feel like the author has done a good job, do you want to reopen it? This book reminds me of when I first read The Great Road Fight. That sense of novelty. This was the first time I saw that kind of different kind of Xianxia.

Better than Bailian😜

Seems like an acquaintance

I admire myself for getting up after one o'clock to code. 😏

To be honest, the look and feel is quite good, and there is really no poison. I just want to make a small suggestion, grasp the tension and ups and downs of the plot well (pure nonsense, it feels like empty talk hehe). I ignored the previous sentence. I mainly think that the author has done a good job of the small climax and the big climax of the plot, as well as the intervals between them. It should not be just a small climax, nor a big climax. The length of the foreshadowing between the peaks should also be considered. It is best to prevent the reader from feeling irritated by the dull plot between the two peaks, and to allow the reader to feel irritated after the climax arrives. The reader's eyes light up, and his mind rises and falls (I feel like I can stand and speak without pain in my back), (I mutter in a low voice: I feel that the rhythm of the plot from the time when the Dao turns into a pill and approaches Yuanying to the time when it goes to the mountains and seas is very well controlled and perfect, such as the small climax of achieving Yuanying, sixteen The climax of the sword fight, the second level of Nascent Soul suppressing Dong Sheng and the demon behind the law are all small climaxes, the achievement of Dongtian and the subsequent period of the peak,) In short, the author just took a look at it, and mainly wrote according to his own ideas. Anyway, it seems to be quite good now.

I was quite surprised to see that the author was striving for perfection and was preparing to reopen the book. I felt that this was a very good first book. Compared with many novels, it had fewer flaws and no major flaws. The first book, The Destiny of Squid, was boring at the beginning, but it was still a good book in the end. I felt that it was a good book. This is a good start, but maybe I am still young and don't pay enough attention to it, but I feel that a good book will not be buried, emm. I just thought about it again and found out that the author may also feel it (guess you are not satisfied with this aspect). As far as I am concerned, it may be the current content, how should I put it? , I can't describe it as bland, would it be better to use powerless (it just can't make people fall into that feeling all at once, but I feel that that kind of feeling can only be achieved by a very powerful book, and it can also be achieved by the development of the plot background later), emm As I was typing, I thought again, I found that wherever I looked, they all seemed to be small plots, the kind where one chapter, two chapters, two chapters and three chapters would be OK (Gu Xiu Yifu has not seen the details yet, so I don't know). I was wondering if it would be better if there was a plot with more words at the beginning, and it is not compact enough (for example, within a certain length) The small goal has not come out (killing demons and accumulating vitality should be the main theme of the whole story, not the small goal). There is only one big goal of immortality, which makes people feel a little far away and indistinct, as if they are drifting with the tide.) Speaking of this, I feel that the protagonist is not proactive enough in some places. I feel all of the above Looking at the general direction and the overall problem, it can only be said that it is a shortcoming at the current stage, which can be adjusted later. It is not a big problem (for example, there is no poisonous point, which is really great). I feel that the plot is not too slow (there are subplots and explanations, and it is even a bit compact on the surface, but it is really not. It's compact at a deeper level, just like the former compactness is just a compact plot, and the latter one is a plot rhythm that is moderately compact but not loose), oh, by the way, I think that several small plots cannot be combined into a big plot. I feel that some plots are a little independent and not integrated, with a sense of division. Maybe this is why I think the plot is It is not a very compact factor The above personal opinion (from the perspective of excellence) In addition, I would like to ask the author what he is dissatisfied with in what he wrote {"NickName":"Happy Fairy","UserId":228602312}

Newcomers self-recommend "How did I become a giant in cultivating immortality", please support me!

It's pretty good. I'd like to submit a recommendation. I just want to ask. I think I'm also committed to Daowu CP.

This book really has the flavor of a monk.

Suddenly, I discovered that articles without a contract cannot be voted for or rewarded. [Cheek support]

I was eating fried rice on the roadside and watching

I don't read online novels for more than ten minutes a day

It's really well written, I'm waiting to read it every day, come on!

I wanted to write a masterpiece that took a different approach, but in the process I seemed to feel that I couldn't do it, so I could only lower my standards and follow what others said.