Douluo's Beastmaster

Because I failed to change the profile and cannot change it again within a week, I will post some words here. This article is a harem novel. This is the tone set early on and it is impossible to change it. So if you can't read a harem novel, don't force yourself to read it. There is also the issue of the route. Although the author is a newcomer and his writing power is limited, I still plan to try my best not to follow the original route. However, if some plot needs it, if I really want to participate, I will try to write something different from the original work. There are also several sensitive areas. 1. We don't worship the master. 2. Relationship with Tang San. To be honest, I still like Tang San in Dou 1. I want to write him into a good brother relationship. After all, I have already poached the corner of Xiao Wu. Because I will try my best to write my own plot for the protagonist, and since she is not a female character, Tang San will probably not appear much in the future. I hope everyone will stop saying that the protagonist is Tang San's dog. After all, we are from the Beast Control Sect, and if Tang San is also the protagonist's dog. To be honest, the earliest idea for this book was when I saw a picture posted by one of the two groups in the comments of a Douluo fanfic about whether or not to go with Tang San. Tang San and Bibi Dong each lead a dog, which probably means that most of Douluo's friends are either Tang San's dog or the Spirit Hall's dog. After reading it, I felt quite uncomfortable. At that time, I wanted to simply write a book where Tang San and Bibi Dong would be my dogs. Then I thought of the setting of the Beast Control Sect, and then I decided to write about the harem. To be honest, although I like reading harem novels, I don't really like writing harem novels. What I hate most is that as the harem grows, the impression of the heroine that I liked before becomes less and less, and in the end she becomes less distinctive. I want to focus on the heroine, but I am a complete newcomer, not one of those big guys who pretend to be newbies in the group. My writing skills are really bad, and I really think I won't be able to control it later on, so I still want to write about a single heroine. I am a reader who pays great attention to some external logic, pay attention to external logic. For example, because soul skills are very similar to skills, we often use some cool skills from anime to make soul skills, but I always feel unnatural and uncomfortable to watch. So I made this setting of Wuhun Editor to find rationality for it. And for this reason, I can't always write some invincible articles, such as the once popular Donghuang Bell, Pangu Ax, etc., Which are invincible as soon as they come out. A hundred-year soul skill is more powerful than other people's thousand-year soul skill or ten-thousand-year soul skill. Brother, can you think about your maximum contribution? If it doesn't work, think about how much soul power you have at level ten, and I'll vomit. I don't really care about the logic in the story, as long as I can read it. But I really can't stand the logic of the setting. Therefore, there is the omnipotent Hundred-Forged Divine Fist. As the encyclopedia of the world of immortality, Baidian Shenquan said, I can do anything. Okay, that's all I want to say for now. If there is anything else in the future, I will continue to write it below. By the way, are you new here? I hope you can bear with me a little more. If you think it's a little bit toxic, please leave a message below this post and I will think about it and modify it. Finally, of course, I beg everyone to bookmark and recommend it. It would be even better if you have a monthly pass.

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The previous ones are all good, but the few scenes where the protagonist just went to Shrek were so embarrassing to watch, and the way to improve the favorability is as childish as a child playing house. Author, you might as well write about slowly improving it in future life and training. This way of watching it is almost embarrassing.

Dear brothers and sisters, I am a newbie with a new book. I hope you will support me a lot. If you have any other ideas, you can post them here and I will consider them. It is inevitable that there will be some problems when writing a book for the first time. Please tell me if you find any, and I will correct them if I can. The other thing is to collect and recommend, please, this is really important to me. Thank you again for your support!

A good card with great potential is getting worse and worse.

The beast control sect. As far as this book is concerned. Can't they be exactly the same? All I can say is that it has nothing to do with it.

It's a pity that the subject matter is okay. It would be a pity not to write about Douluo and Dou Po together? If there are plug-ins, it is best to write about Zhutian. For Douluo, a good spirit is enough. Originally, the level of Douluo in the world is not high, so cultivating immortals is completely redundant.

See Chapter 13... Xiaowu, are you ready to share it with Tang San? One in front and one in back? Can all sensitive points be shared?

Why do fan writers like to stuff other power systems into this body? There is no way to sort out and perfect the power system in the fan book, and the result is nondescript.

The Gauntlets of Fire... Emmm... Are too low 😅 I'll give you one, wouldn't you call it Flame Grasp😏

Everything you write is weird

The writing is very good. The author is not a eunuch. Don't worry about the messy comments in the book reviews. You have to believe that you have written well. Keep at it, it will be very interesting.

No, isn't it bad to take Liu Erlong? She is also a beast martial spirit. Do you really want to take advantage of Yu Xiaogang's fw?

By the way, why do you want to enroll in Shrek?

I don't even dare to drive a car 🤫

Ye Yuanyuan: Needless to say, I will let you use one hand to fight with your fingers!