Douluo: After Five Years of Signing in the Haotian Sect, I Am Invincible

Watch dozens of chapters and review them objectively! 1: The protagonist awakened the dual god-level martial souls in the early stage, but did not match the correct soul power. The one hundred thousand year soul ring was too watery, and he had no physical fitness to force the upper limit to be raised! 2: The character arrangement is unreasonable. As a direct descendant of the Clear Sky Sect, the reason for not awakening the Clear Sky Hammer is not filled in! 3: The early development of the Chamber of Commerce is unreasonable, and the bank cannot be established without power. The money in charge of a continent is written down in one stroke, and no one is looking for trouble. It is unrealistic. The Mercenary Guild and the Alchemy Pavilion are cultivating large forces. If they are involved too deeply, they will attract the attention of the Empire and the Martial Temple (the Martial Temple originally wanted to unify the continent and cannot let it go). The author has brushed it off without explaining it. I don't understand! 4: There is no specific description of the protagonist's improvement in strength, just a quick summary! It's understandable that this book is mainly for educating the younger generation, but the protagonist's improvement in strength is totally uninspiring! 5: The plot has no main idea, is it a struggle for hegemony? Invincible? Or behind the scenes? The plot is confusing! 6: The cultivation system is chaotic. The Yanhuang Seven Stars have no soul rings that can increase soul power. This is a problem that the protagonist Tang San cannot solve even before he awakens his martial soul! 7: The protagonist's combat power system has collapsed. At level 20, he can fight a Titled Douluo whose soul power has been reduced to level 80. However, when he fights against the Titan clan at level 50, he has to use the Titled Douluo experience card! The combat power index is unknown! To put it bluntly, the combat power is so low that if you want to suppress the protagonist, you can only suppress him forcefully! 8: Contact with Tang San was too abrupt. Tang San valued love and righteousness. Not to mention the protagonist beating his teacher half to death, even if Xiao Wu was injured during the fight with Qixing, he would have to fight hard! How could I possibly trade with you! The character descriptions of all the characters are too poor! I only saw this, I didn't read the rest, but after reading the table of contents, I knew the plot. This book is not suitable for old bookworms! I'm running out of books, but I can make a transition! Anyway, I, an old bookworm, saw too many flaws! If you haven't seen the original version, you should be able to read it! This is a suggestion to the author, don't spray! ! !

Okay, how much did the editor charge or is there some kind of deal? Can be recommended

When I saw someone in the profile, I thought of what my friend said some time ago, and the woman wailed.

How did this book get recommended by the editor? Is it so obvious that the editor eats red envelopes?

1. The writing style and logic are really not that good. The author should keep working hard. 2. The introduction emphasizes that the author is a woman, which is very unfavorable. Is it more noble for women to write books than for men? 3. I suggest you guys who give you good reviews stop doing licking. If you lick it badly, they won't pay attention to you.

It's very interesting to watch. It has a different setting. The protagonist is behind the scenes and develops the team. It's very good.

It's a bit poisonous. Now the Qidian novel is getting worse and worse. The first chapter persuades you to quit.

I think it looks good, has good logic, and is not brainless. I don't know what I mean by saying it doesn't look good.

Seeing the male protagonist cheating on Qian Renxue, she was a little bit poisoned. Do you really want to forcefully cheat on her?

I originally wanted to watch it, but it turned out that the martial soul's name was Jin Fu, so I suddenly lost my mind. To be honest, it's just fun to be funny, tm Wan Hao's name is Jin Fu, even just call him Wan Hao.

The writing is average and seems quite embarrassing, but the plot is not mindless and can be watched. Also, I'm a little concerned about why the author emphasizes that she is a female author. Nowadays, there are about 64 ratios of male and female writers writing Douluo fanfics, and there are not too few female writers. If I said something wrong, I will delete it

The popular character Zhu Zhuqing is not the protagonist. How can such a book not be poisonous?

Let's say it's an invincible novel. It doesn't look good. Let's say it's not an invincible novel. What it gives is invincible. Also, the author hopes that you will understand the Douluo setting first before you write the book. Otherwise, the original author will find it embarrassing, and those with a bad temper will just start scolding them.

Yy is too serious, just for fun. If you want to write a novel, first of all, you need to understand the protagonist. What is this person's personality, what behavior patterns, what abilities he has, and what goals he has. The novel is written for others to read. What kind of person is the protagonist? Will it be recognized by readers? You have to figure this out. Secondly, as a fan, you need to have an idea of ​​the behavior patterns of the supporting characters. He beat Tang Long for not awakening at the age of 6, and took out his 100,000-year-old soul bone and soul ring. Have you considered Tang Xiao's feelings? ? ? It's beyond the scope of logic. Do you think it's cool or stupid?

When I saw Tang San being licked, I didn't want to watch anymore.

Jinfu Jinfu, the whole audience cheered. It's a good hour, but it's not suitable for people to watch. I'm Shennong. No thanks.

Golden Chapter Three, I only read three chapters and then retreated.

Come in, Chapter 1, emm goodbye

Whoever writes about the Douluo system either licks Tang San or licks the Wuhun Palace. Isn't it nice to build your own power and then seduce the woman you like? The author's writing is pretty good. Those who lick Tang San and lick the Wuhun Palace are tired of watching them.

Uh-huh, there are too many loopholes overall. Many skill authors have not remembered it. They can't remember the things they set. Generally speaking, it looks okay. Some of the more serious ones are hard to stand.

It's just that the update is too slow

510,000 Words and more than 200 chapters?

The hangup is a bit big, the original work is locked every ten levels