The Cute Master Pretends to Be My System

It's unfinished. Apart from the pitfalls mentioned at the end of the novel, there are too many things that haven't been explained. Instead of filling in the pitfalls in the new book, it's better to finish it in this book (which turned out to be cut off in the new one). It's said to be a dog-food novel, but it's impossible not to write any plot in the novel. In the later period, the plot line was unfinished, which made the emotional line feel like it was completed for the sake of completion. As for the writing style, although the emotional line is very sweet, the male protagonist sometimes makes me feel oily. I'm tired of it, and the heroine's love brain is a bit too much. Some of the plots in the later stages are really awkward and blunt. I don't know if it's because it's about to end or if it's just a writing problem (for example, the part where the Fox Emperor goes to the modern era made me scratch my toes). The whole story feels like an ancient novel, but it's actually a work from last year Since I've just started to get into dog food writing, the setting of this novel is quite attractive to me, but it's a pity that the writing can't hold up.

All booked, come and take a look

Oh ~ I want to eat this damn soft rice too!

There are no single-heroine novels that are good to read. If you don't agree, use the title of the book to argue. If there is no title, don't bb.

So what, I discovered a big thing (๑˙ー˙๑) Some of the more erotic chapters, some fields in them have been harmonized! ! ! ! I never knew about it. I just checked it out on a whim and found that it had been deleted so that the preface and the follower were not matched, which somewhat affected the viewing experience. I will try to make changes, but I may not be able to notice them all, so if you see something obviously wrong before or after a paragraph, you can @ha(●—●)

Lizixiang q version

My ability is limited, that's it😅

It is a book about jockey Zhizu and his master.😍

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The only difference is the ears, this one has folded ears, while in the book they have erect ears, the picture is from Nishuihan Post Bar player Qian Cong Cong invaded and deleted 🤭🤭🤭

What evil intentions can a little fox have?

Please give me some recommendation votes, dear brothers_(:з∠)_ I'm going to die without any recommendation votes If you have a book, you can also place a full subscription (๑˙ー˙๑) if you have the conditions (๑˙ー˙๑) Don't look back and keep it to death ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

A piece of work for self-entertainment - Feifei😅 There is a saying that there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. If it destroys everyone's good image of themselves in their hearts, I would like to bow down and apologize first, and hold me back.

Let me make a small suggestion Don't be too hasty to clearly mark the label of "single female protagonist" at the beginning, as it will affect some readers. The reasons are as follows 1. Different readers will like different characters in the book. For example, I like Boiling Blood very much 😁. Readers who put themselves into the protagonist will feel disappointed after knowing that it is a single female protagonist, so... 2. There have been more and more poisonous articles in recent years. It's hard to make the relationship between male and female characters reasonable and attractive. Generally speaking, novice authors do not have this ability. Readers take a look at "new author + single female protagonist". Okay~ Another disgusting author who gives away girls after seducing them without marrying him 😒 3. Some readers just like harem stories,,,,, you've just blocked the road. 4. Compared with harem novels about a single heroine, it is somewhat more difficult to write in terms of "emotion". It needs more characterization and plot design, as well as the protagonist's mental journey, the heroine's non-main story, etc. Etc… It's very troublesome. 5. Stock trading + appropriate holdings can create conflicts and confrontations, and help cut leeks (cross out). Helps develop true love fans of each character. That's what it means~ Brother, just take a look. It's mainly because I saw your single chapter and I had some thoughts that I wanted to share. (Ps: I personally think that single heroine and multiple heroines are fine for me, but I'm just a little sorry that Wu Feng Bo Xue can't take in much.) I didn't say anything specific and useful, and I don't have the ability to teach people to write novels. It's just a little thank you suggestion from a reader. Finally, I'll give you a reward of 1,500, cheers.

I feel like I'm being fed to death. With only a 3% follow-up rate, is it true that I only have Chaquanqin's life?

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This book has received mixed reviews, but I think it is fundamentally well written. First of all, I think the character Song Jiang is handled very well. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before who always chatted with Lin Daiyu and did not do his job properly. Including the scene where Xiahou Dun fights Xu Sanduo is also described very well. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. And Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as stated in the original work. It was the sparks that sparked with her after experiencing Chang Su's transference. In this way, the logic of the plot becomes very smooth. Give book lovers a refreshing feeling. The plot of the story is also very detailed and fascinating. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions have tightly locked the eyes of book friends. The plot of the finale fight scene between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is well arranged, and the open ending makes book friends even more yearning for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. What is worth mentioning is the vicissitudes of the country when Big Big Wolf missed Zhou Zhiruo in Akina Mountain, and Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he stole Huba, the Uchiha clan's sacred object, was suddenly shown. The stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang, who guest-starred in the book, and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to rescue his grandfather are also highlights.

After reading a few chapters, I kept thinking about the name of the heroine. All I could think about was chestnut ball, kuribo, feathered chestnut ball, clean chestnut ball, sacrifice chestnut ball, waste chestnut ball, connected chestnut ball, rainbow chestnut ball, spherical chestnut ball, susheng chestnut ball, entertainment partner, horizontal chestnut ball, anka chestnut ball, magic chestnut ball, starlight chestnut ball, chestnut ball, chestnut ball, my chestnut ball. . . . . Hey hey 😍 chestnut ball. . .

Inexplicably, I thought of this aunt

After reading it, I can only say that the heroine Li Zixiang described it well at the beginning, but the rest of the story is a complete mess. The plot relies entirely on the supporting characters, and there is no logic at all. The male and female protagonists are wanted, and they are still thinking about getting pregnant, and they spend a lot of money on medicines to prepare for pregnancy. In the end, it was exposed, which really made me laugh. I felt that the author was really out of ink and didn't know what plot to write. In the later period, Li Zixiang was purely a fertility machine. She only thought about giving birth to children, and her subjective feelings were greatly reduced. At 80% of the full story, the male protagonist is still a rookie, and his improvement in the later stages is too abrupt. To sum up - it's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless.

Oh, it's a miracle that this one ended up safe and sound.

Okay, Tauren, let's continue, I'll take my leave! So disgusting

The author must be a girl

The writing is too slow, eighty chapters in, and the male protagonist is still at the lowest level of cultivation. He is clearly in crisis, but he still wanders around every day.

It's not very good. It's all about driving to show off the scene. The more you watch, the more boring you become. With such a good qualification, you have to do all kinds of things. Isn't it good to cultivate immortality with peace of mind? Isn't it invincible? Overall, both male and female protagonists give people a weird feeling

Eat big dried fish with tofu skin

This book is really sweet, and why is the author so good at it 🙂

It's not that I don't understand why the people around me were caught, but they didn't rescue them for a long time, and they still put aside their love. They kept saying that it was okay, that they had cards and big moves, and the demons would definitely not kill them. I really couldn't stand it when I saw this.

Why is the heroine so free? It's very confusing from the beginning

Which is more complete, the original or the pirated version of this book? I watched the pirated version to replenish my ticket.