The Queen Smiles

As long as you guys don't think my writing is bad, you can give me more opinions! ! ! This is my first time writing a book. Please support me!

Can you see me? Just squeak.

The mixture of first person and third person seems confusing. If the first person's writing skills are not good, it will collapse. I still hope to use the third person.

Why can the protagonist integrate into this world so calmly without struggling?

You played games a few days before the college entrance examination. Don't you think it's fake?

I suggest changing the pregnancy settings

Dig it out and see if the corpse is fake. If not, bury it back and stamp on it.

It's so fascinating. I won't tell you if the plot is good or not. There are many typos and there are no double quotes. The end of the third chapter even changes to first person.

Going in again? Update soon!

Please support me and take care of me.

Welcome to the group*^_^*

There is something I don't know whether I should say or not. Just smile, life or death is uncertain.

Just add some of your own content,

I hope the author can add double quotation marks when talking to big characters (◍•ᴗ•◍)