Yangyang Chinese Calendar

The plot and writing are all top-notch. The fly in the ointment is the layout of the text. Although the three golden chapters are not too important, the reader's perception is still based on coins. It is recommended to stagger the paragraphs and sentences, which can provide food and grass, and keep updating. Come on ✊

After reading the first six chapters, the writing skills are quite good, and the combination of some famous historical figures is pretty good. However, after reading the whole article, the paragraphs are too long, which would usually seem cumbersome, and the large book is still in classical Chinese. The combination of the two makes the text extremely heavy and difficult to read patiently. Some necessary paragraphs must be broken down and written in sentences. Because there are key points in each paragraph, if they are piled up like this, the meaning expressed in the paragraphs will not be found, making it difficult for readers to understand. This is a great pity for the excellent writing style! The plot behind it seems to have not been fully developed yet? It's just paving the way for several powerful forces in this world. It is recommended that you don't spend so much time here in the early stage, just describe it briefly, because the protagonist is still very weak at the moment. After reading the introduction and these forces, I automatically made up the plot behind it. It is not enough for readers to easily guess the subsequent development, but suspense must be left. Everything else is not a big problem, keep up the good work~ Looking forward to a return visit

It's great, the description is very comprehensive, the chapter titles are also very good, and the skills are profound.

Great piece! Collected! Take your time and watch! I hope you can keep updating steadily! Come on! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

The writing skills are quite solid, the plot looks good so far, and the introduction attracts readers. It is a good novel. I look forward to updates. Come on, bookmark it now. Welcome to visit again.

The celestial dynasty is covered with thousands of waves, the area is full of light. When human emperors dance together across the sky, God controls the ancient and modern territories.

The great country is in China, and as soon as the gate of Xishu is opened, there is a madman called the First Emperor, who will rule for one generation and then destroy the second generation. Now I hold a pen as well as a sword, one sword and one month for the Qin Dynasty! I am from 5021. I am passing by Qin to check in!

The paragraphs in the previous chapters are too long, which makes it uncomfortable to read. After all, it is the first few pictures that attract people. You can change them. The writing is very good.

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It's really well written. If you don't look at the content, your writing is a thousand times better than mine 👍👍 After reading your article, I can't write anymore. It's a bit irritating. I have to work harder.

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There has been no update for two days. What do you mean, it was cut?

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~