Broken Thoughts and Star Record

Support it! The details in the novel are very detailed and vivid, and the characters have their own characteristics. I have watched it once so far, and the plot is still very attractive, and the writing is also good. Already collected! To be honest, under the cover of the routine and standardized unnutritious "shuangwen", the novel's literary, adventurous and relatively plain beginning is still refreshing. After all, the story at least does not fall into the clichés of "rebirth", "revenge" and "reincarnation", where the protagonist stirs up trouble along the way. Naturally, the origin of the opening story, the protagonist's "adventure" and the smooth start still seem a bit similar to similar novels - but the plot conception and the portrayal of environmental characters are much better. I also hope that the author can continue to give me that sense of surprise. As far as a fantasy novel is concerned, this beginning is already very good. Here again I would like to express my support for the author! However, if they want to innovate and get rid of the shackles of "crushing all the way, rising all the way, and stereotyped and flat characters" in the cool novel, the author still needs to work hard on the complexity of the plot and characters - after all, just with mediocre monster fighting, upgrades or adventures, it will eventually either become a cool novel or fail to capture the audience's attention; and the characters cannot be too flat, after all, people are complex, and people will have different thoughts at different time periods. Finally, I hope the author can persevere and write an amazing fantasy novel!

There is a poem by Zhao Yi from the Qing Dynasty that goes: "There are talented people from generation to generation, and each has been leading the way for hundreds of years." I am fortunate enough to have been classmates with the author of this book for three years. The author Yang Fei is talented at a young age, has a brilliant mind, and is as full of aura as Yu Guang, the protagonist of this book. Now he has written this book "The Record of Broken Thoughts and Stars". Although it has only been updated for a few chapters, the author has slowly unfolded the grand fantasy world he constructed in front of readers. Tension and relaxation coexist, macro and micro are coordinated, and the setting and recycling of foreshadowing are also very clever and surprising enough. His extremely high level of writing can be seen from the exquisite yet compact storyline and the elegant yet mature language skills. It also puts forward some expectations for the author. Good works require deep character creation. As Yi Jian Wu Shang said in the book club, the characters are not flat. When a character faces difficulties or choices, his or her inner activities are extremely complex. For example, the protagonist cannot only have extraordinary thoughts, but also have the concerns of ordinary people. At the same time, the degree of shaping of supporting characters also determines the quality of the work to a large extent. Delving deeply into the character's heart will make such a character more real and three-dimensional and more resonant with readers. In addition, if the theme of the work can be sublimated, focusing on popularization while arousing a certain amount of thinking from readers, so that the novel has a deeper spiritual core, then such excellent works will be more likely to stand out among other novels. I believe that the author Yang Fei will continue to insist on high-quality and excellent creations and lead a generation of coquettish people.

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The writing is very good, and the reading is very enjoyable. The descriptions are also very good. The words and the story are well controlled. Both the foreshadowing and the conflicts are fully described. However, it is a little tiring to read. I understand that the author wants to express a lot, has prepared a lot, and has many lines, so I read it twice before I figured out many details. Overall, I'm still very optimistic about it. Come on,

The cool spots are a bit slow to appear, so it is recommended that they appear at the beginning to catch your eyes.

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