The Real Men in the Heroic Company of the Super Seminary

I've read Chapter 58. The protagonist is basically useless and doesn't have much presence. Moreover, the protagonist's sister is a poisonous point. Secondly, she has the tsundere attribute of the younger sister. However, the writing is really good. At least this is the best writing I have seen among so many supernatural novels. I hope the protagonist will have some role in the future.

Alas. Dual protagonists are difficult to write. This book collapsed early, I announced.

Regardless of whether they are angels, demons or the gluttonous sun, when they set the battlefield on the earth, the ones who are hurt will still be the earthlings, and they will not survive even if they die. These angels and demons spend some resources and become heroes. Standing on the side of the earth, these aliens deserve to die, and the same goes for the Deno survivors. They attract the attention of aliens, and they are half responsible.

What a logically confusing introduction, it made me go crazy.

The two protagonists will look very awkward and prone to jumping.

There were a lot of introductions (I said, he said), which directly gave me away the courage to open and read.

Let me complain, Ge Xiaolun has written too much, and Lin Xiaofei is just like a tool. It is okay to write two male protagonists, but at least you can shape Lin Xiaofei first, and then you will have no problem writing Ge Xiaolun. Now this part of Ge Xiaolun gives people the feeling that you can watch it or not, it doesn't matter.

Author, you can tell Ge Xiaolun about the three-body world view, that would be more interesting

Inexplicably, I retreated.

If the author can write the two protagonists well, then the author will be a master, not a little flutter.

The first part was good, but the second part was too self-indulgent and a bit boring. The golden finger felt useless, the protagonist felt like he had been replaced, and the fun feeling of being a fan was gone. In short, the more I wrote, the worse it got.

At the beginning of "Five Poisons Complete", I took my sister to read nine chapters and three chapters, relying on my sister's water numbers. . . When I read novels about sisters, sisters, brothers and brothers, these novels usually give me a headache, especially those that describe more than 3 chapters. . It doesn't mean that you can't use that kind of annoying ink-stained opening water. The description of my sister in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is less than 300 words, and the whole book Devouring the Family appears to promote the plot and the number of words is less than 3 chapters. ,. . . This book starts with one girl and the rest rely on water.

An introduction to Guapi. I didn't expect that I would finish reading it. I am also a Guapi but I just have no interest in reading the content of the book. This introduction is really Guapi.

Regarding the setting of Morgana, I always feel that you have forced your wits this time and lost her courage as the Demon Queen. In the original work, when facing the black hole, she did not beg for mercy like Hua Ye or like Karl for help. Instead, she faced the black hole itself, rushed in, and then blew up the black hole. It feels like what you wrote does not look like the setting of Morgana itself.

Just this introduction makes me not want to read the content