I Can Incarnate in Another World

The writing is okay, but the plot arrangement is a bit problematic. This is a bit similar to killing monsters, and the male protagonist needs to be more careful to make it exciting. It is unwise to continue to use contradictions to develop the plot. There will definitely be more and more variable races in the future. How to grasp the balance will be a problem, or the gold finger is too large, otherwise it will be very troublesome to list the cards later. Generally speaking, the protagonist here also somewhat ignores the power of his golden finger, and the connection between the fighting and the plot is a bit inexplicable. Generally speaking, seeing that some problems have appeared, the author should try his best to avoid it and not really become a white paper. (It is recommended to read the book "Ten Years One Click" and study it. It will bring us more joy and let us see the value of this book. Thank you, the author. 🐶

The subject matter is quite good, and the writing and plot are good. If you keep writing at this level, you will definitely get results.

There is a danger of this topic being blocked. The transformation writing has been tightened recently. I hope you won't get blocked 🙂🙂. Come on!

After reading the first few chapters, I found that the writing was pretty good, and the subject matter was okay, but the writing style was a bit average, and overall it was pretty good.

Dear author, I think it would be better to change the beginning of the second chapter this way. Lin Dong helped Wall who fell to the ground. When he was a baby, it was this strong man who took him back to the village after being abandoned at the entrance of the village and raised him. Lin Dong was filled with gratitude for the shelter and care given to Wall and other villagers, and he had already regarded everyone in the village as a close relative. He won't let them get hurt even a little bit more.

How many collections does the author have now? I have read that many newcomers' books did not have outstanding results at the beginning, but they all started to take off after 300 collections 👏 Let's see if the big results will be the same as my statistical data.

No, I didn't understand it. Didn't he travel through time? But do you remember the grace of upbringing? The logic doesn't make sense! There is no need to force the plot.

It's a pity that it was cut. When will the new book be released?

Signing is now available, friends who want to invest should hurry up😃😃

Very good subject matter, keep it up!