Vangohg and the Novelist

2021.2.19 Thanks {"NickName":"Xiaoyan Nawucai","UserId":346335320} This is my first little reader, thank you.

Thank you {"NickName":"Earth's meteorites","UserId":346286577} for your support. I hope you enjoy my work.

Let me talk about a few problems First, the space problem at the beginning of the paragraph is usually two spaces, but you have left several spaces, which makes the readers a little uncomfortable Second, the problem of paragraphing-mainly manifested in a paragraph that is not a dialogue but several periods appear at the same time, which is not supposed to be the case. The paragraph will be scored Third, a chapter is too long. If possible, just split it into a chapter of two to three thousand words-because after market testing, this is the best way for readers to A range of acceptance (of course, the great masters of Eagle are just exceptions) In general, the format is not good The writing is good, but the format makes the reading experience unsmooth - this is a fatal problem It is recommended to take a look at the books on the rankings and learn their layout, maybe you can do better Really, I personally feel that the writing content of your book is very good, and there is a chance to get out of the circle