Super Trading System from Another World

The plot is very cliche, the writing is poor, and even the subject matter is leftover from someone else's play. What's left in this book?

I can submit the material, but what is the content?

As someone who writes a trading system, I have a question. Why should basic things like grain (something that the ancients needed) be traded with pig's feet? It should be cheaper to trade with interstellar merchants. I feel like the only thing that can be traded in this system is specialty products (things that only I have). In fact, it is very restrictive.

Department store? Just one person, is that a department store? In larger supermarkets, there are several people, but in our small county, small shops usually only have one person. A slightly older couple cannot imagine how small a department store can be busy by just one person.

The currency can be renamed, 90,000 Realm Coins, 90,000 Realm Coins, 😱 Content: Take snacks, buy armor and go to the prop shop. How can the props made by others be as heavy as in ancient times? If you want to tire out the extras, wouldn't selling it to a general be a scam?

The way I wrote it 10 years ago is embarrassing now.

The subject matter is okay... But the plot is not? ? ? ?

After listening to 2 videos, it really doesn't work. As soon as I have a golden finger, I go out and meet a woman who is a rich second generation, haha.

The subject matter is good, but all the characters have low IQs.

Well, as long as the ID has the logo of "Big Brother of 5 Years" behind it, it will be poisoned to death. The subject matter is very good, but there is a problem with the writing method, there is no logic, it feels like there is no outline, just write whatever comes to mind. The sense of immersion in reading is seriously insufficient

In what age are there still such poisonous books?

What the hell? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It feels like a non-human work, similar to that produced by a system, which is too stupid.

The subject matter is actually okay, but I feel that there is no main plot line, no passionate plot, and it feels as bland as water.

It's a mess, no logic, no coherence.

What the heck, the subject matter is good and the plot is great. This book doesn't have an outline. Just write whatever comes to mind. The Transaction of All Worlds can obviously make the protagonist a boss behind the scenes, establish power in the world, cultivate talents with the extraordinary objects of the trade, and then go directly to the universe in the later stage. If you want to pretend to be a b-face, the villain is completely brainless.

I feel like I am back to reading novels in the 2000s. The novels at that time were all about slaps in the face when buying a car. They were familiar with all kinds of slaps in the face, and they fell in love with all kinds of beauties. In fact, it was just mindless and cool. Why did they often skip paragraphs? Can't stand it anymore

This article is too mind-numbing to write, not to mention the author's wild imagination. I'm sorry I lost to you...