Naruto Maruko Neji
火影之丸子宁次
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Author, have you carefully read what you wrote?
1. There are some 3.1 Person changes in the article (end of Chapter 6) 2. One paragraph is too long and can be divided into more paragraphs 3. There are a lot of punctuation problems. You can read it after writing, which can reduce punctuation problems. 4 You can refer to other people's novels. 5Come on💪, I'm optimistic about you 🤭
I would like to make a few comments. I need to use punctuation marks. There are only four "" and three "" in the whole text. Why do you do that? No one will read it. Also, one paragraph should not be too long. Please be careful to divide it into paragraphs.
Come on, don't give up, practice more.