I Can Do It If I Go on TV

It looked good at first, but now it's a bit uncomfortable. It's completely about love, and it can easily get boring if you watch it too much. Everyone in the love house has a serious job, only the protagonist has nothing to do and falls in love with the heroine. Although it is very sweet, it is a castle in the air. The protagonist's predecessor was a novelist, but he can no longer log in to his previous author account. Now the protagonist has traveled through time and does nothing but fall in love. It should also be a sign of irresponsibility. When I saw the scene where the protagonist climbed onto the bumper car to save people, it made me feel even more fake. This novel is completely one person's fantasy.

The author is a little worried about everyone's praise. He is afraid that if the writing is not good, he will not be able to live up to everyone's expectations. In short, try to adjust your mentality as much as possible, thank you all. Then let's talk about the update issue. There will be two stable updates before it is put on the shelves. After it is put on the shelves, check the results. If the results are good, there will be more updates. If your grades are not good, there is really nothing you can do. Only two shifts and full attendance. Well, that's it. Flash, continue coding.

The part about rescuing people was too deliberate, and it was particularly embarrassing to watch. There are a lot of things that the security guards and staff can't do anything about, but the protagonist can solve them in minutes? What is this operation? Didn't I notice that the protagonist was given the identity of a firefighter? If not, why is the protagonist saved? Acrophobia? 😂 Many things can indeed be done with faith, but more importantly... Many things cannot be done just because you think you can do it. Being able to do it and being able to do it are two different things

To be honest, there is too much nonsense and a lot of nonsense, which makes the character look like a verbose person. Creativity is okay, and this creativity refers to the fact that the protagonist can also participate in variety shows in the original world. The writing feels the same as when I wrote a book fifteen years ago. I feel too embarrassed when I read it. The writing quality is normal, but the awkward writing makes me unbearable.

I went to a show wearing big pants and flip-flops. Is this what a normal person would do? 😅Forcing diaosi writing, as long as there is any sense of normalcy, I will wear shoes and pants.

Author: I was rejected on a blind date. Reader:? ? ? Author: Because I am short😭😭

If you post it here, this book will be published.

Please help, please, don't get on the roller coaster, this is not an urban cultivator, you are too outrageous, it's making people laugh.

It's too bland, has no sense of variety show, and is similar to the style of a domineering president. If it doesn't have the bonus of good looks, it's useless, and it doesn't reflect the value of time travel at all.

With your writing style, you can write a time-travel entertainment article, or make a good unlimited stream. I don't say whether it will be popular or not, it depends on luck, but at least it will be enough for you to earn a normal income. With such a strange setting, the whole book is ruined.

How did you read Chapter 5? Chapter 4: The same friend in two time and space appeared, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Just time travel, why make it so complicated? It's an urban entertainment story, not a weird one.

The first volume is confusing except for the variety show. The second volume is completely incomprehensible. What the heck is the overlap? When reading the novel while skipping or tapping the right screen with your finger, the 8th level of the novel can no longer be read.

Goodbye🙂🙂

It's heavily biased toward the female channel style. The first few dozen chapters are a bit normal, but later on it slowly becomes exaggerated. Whether it's the plot, character dialogue, or the portrayal of some supporting characters, it feels like it's following a template. In addition, the protagonist's "personality" is not very likable. He does not solve work problems as soon as possible, nor does he solve his ability problems. The love progress and process are very fast and have no texture. I prefer to read novels with related themes that start with the protagonist participating in an amateur love reality show. However, there are very few starting points of this type, and there are also very few novels with normal standards on various novel platforms. I hope that the subsequent writing will gradually become better, and the style will not be so exaggerated and the supporting characters will not be brainless.

It's not bad. One thing I want to complain about is that it would be better if the protagonist didn't say embarrassing words in Momo every time after sending the girl away😁😆😡🔨

I have to accept it. The author is so awesome. Is it really because of his strength that he persuades me to quit? Do you think there are too many readers? It was well written. I was so excited that I took a sip of poison, but I pinched my neck and fed it. I was so speechless. I wanted to add a star. It really made people confused. Volume 1 was really well written. I won't say any more and just treat it as the end.

This is how I wrote it ten years ago. I attended a formal occasion, wore flip-flops, and was late on purpose. The author has not changed the way I wrote it at all! The next step should be to show off and slap in the face, right?

Personally, I feel that the first volume was well written, but why did it start to fall off a cliff in the second round 🙄🙄

Well! Author, you have the strength to persuade me to quit! Slipping away😰😰

I should have read the comments in advance... The first volume was very nice and started normally, but the second volume was inexplicably messed up in time and space. This setting is too ridiculous. It's completely unnecessary. We can open a B&B together later, or start a company, or write songs. There is also a super rich second generation... I want to send you a razor blade.

I really can't understand this book. From the time we did a show together to the time we established a relationship, we didn't even leave a phone call, and then we couldn't find the person. This crazy thing, the logic doesn't make sense and it's a bit limited!

Boss, are you serious about the second volume... Although I ate a lot of dog food in the first volume, my aunt laughed the whole time. What the hell is this second volume?

Is the variety show really good? What should I do if I can't stand it?

The time and space superposition setting is good. However, the characters in the content were also mixed together, which made me a little bit distracted when watching it. I couldn't stand it, so I decided to quit!

Might as well write about having children with the heroine.

Can the protagonist get his writer account back? ? I don't want to watch it. I don't have any desire to watch it anymore.

I received the news today that the new internally submitted book was approved. Spread the flowers. This book will be finished on the 1st, and the new book will be released on the 4th. If you like reading fantasy and fairy tales, I hope you can give the author another chance. Learning from this experience, the new book will not make the same mistake as this book again. Of course, there are actually very few readers who are still reading this book. Let's post a post and talk about masturbation. Bless yourself and hope that your new book will have acceptable results, Oli!

After reading the first volume, I was immediately confused. . . Sudden turning points, no sense of substitution, writing a world view for the plot, you are enough

The more I watch it, the more I feel like it ends the same as Your Name. Two people ran into each other in the same place.

The more I watch it, the more I feel like it ends the same as Your Name. Two people ran into each other in the same place.