The Alien Mage of the Marvel Universe

The setting at the beginning felt very interesting, but there were so many magics written in the front, and the tomb robbing in the first world made me instantly distracted. I looked at the table of contents, but I didn't finish it and couldn't jump to it, so I wrote some comments and left!

You'd better write Western movies and American TV series. The combination of Western and Western movies will be very ugly. You shouldn't be into tomb robbers in the first place. You might as well be into Harry Potter to learn magic.

I can't stand it any longer. The setting is quite interesting. But after watching a few pictures, I really can't stand this thing. The protagonist is mentally retarded. He is a time traveler and he has the power of blood. Oh my god, he is also an interstellar race after all. His physical fitness is so poor. He doesn't understand anything and can't do anything. Are you sure there is still a lot of knowledge about interstellar society? I am speechless. I really can't watch it. I don't know what to say. The performance is mediocre.

Defeat, good guy, drive high and go low, go to the tomb in the first world. Since it is for the fire ladybug, why not the original one in the HP world? Since you can travel to the HP world, it represents a complete world view and a huge biological system. Magical animals can see that this is just the tip of the iceberg, so I say. . There is absolutely no need to go to the first world. I'm speechless, come on, slip away

You used so many descriptions at the beginning to describe how awesome the protagonist's race is, what multidimensionality, and what planes and universes there are, but then you went to Hogwarts and said that most of the tribe couldn't beat Dumbledore. . He also boasted about how awesome the protagonist's magic circuit is, saying that the professors are greedy, so he just shows it to others for nothing, and there is also a so-called temptation for the protagonist to protect Harry Potter in the duel with Voldemort in the Forbidden Forest. There are also people who are deliberately holding back. Dumbledore is more powerful than most of your tribe. You, a rookie, are not afraid of being defeated by Voldemort?? . This plot feels like the protagonist is trying to put his hot face on his cold butt. . Looking embarrassed

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The setting is quite interesting, but the writing is poor.

This kind of combination of things and things at the beginning is very easy to die suddenly. At the beginning, you should first explore the Western world to accumulate popularity, and then if you really like the world view of tomb robbing, you can write and test the water. The tomb robbing at the beginning will cause many people who don't like the combination of things and things to stop reading.

In fact, you can transform Tomb Raider or The Mummy. The combination of east and west is really good...

Under the guise of Marvel, the real world is written, the setting is powerful, and it's a complete mess.