The Beginning of Douluo Is a Deer

I say this is the protagonist, who agrees and who opposes?

Come on, do you really want Xiaoyue and Patrick to be absorbed by humans? Losing consciousness would be the same as death. It would definitely be a huge blow to the protagonist. For example, when we walked out of the forest, we originally thought we could be together, but when we saw each other again, we only saw soul rings. Just thinking about it will give you a big blow, and you may even get angry at humans. Moreover, Xiaoyue has been in the forest, how did she know about Zhu Zhuqing? This is a bug

Can it turn into a nine-color deer in the later stage? This is a mythical beast.

The most taboo thing in the novel is the two time-travelers

This book seemed quite interesting at first, but then his father appeared and started to become poisonous. It doesn't matter if you make up a random god, but can you not use Old Jack? Then the damn kitten ran away to become Zhu Zhuqing's soul ring for no apparent reason. Isn't this too damn poisonous? What kind of plot could a logic genius come up with? In addition, looking at Tang Hao's plot from the front, is the protagonist going to kneel down and lick Tang San? Then there is another logical genius who becomes Tang San's soul ring like Xiao Wu?

Shen Nong was poisoned and died, you can give it a try

If you write about soul beasts, just write about soul beasts. Why do you have to become a human and start practicing from scratch? Or turn into a human and preserve your strength. Otherwise, he would always be in beast form. It's so boring to feel neither up nor down.

If the author is here to make money, please write in a way that makes it more enjoyable. Today's readers are not what they used to be. People nowadays read novels just to feel comfortable. If they are not there to make money, then I didn't say anything

This article is so complete that I don't need to read it. The poison test is over, I have completely left Douluo, and I have become a cultivator.

I'm not saying that the author's writing is too confusing. I just saw chapter 36 and couldn't stand it anymore. One after another, the self-created characters appeared, a Leng Shuang appeared here, a princess appeared there, another Dayan Dynasty appeared, and before it was over, another Ning Rongrong's brother appeared. There is no need for so many characters, even if it is needed. You can write it later. In the early stage, it is used to promote the plot, and you can sprinkle some sugar to slow it down. But for the real plot, you have to start with the Soul Master Competition and beyond to make it really easy for you to compile. Now this is popping up here and that is popping up there. There will be nothing to write about later. You're not going to write the protagonist to go to the killing city, are you? It's easy for the article to collapse if you go there.

Here's an impression picture [funny]

In Douluo, humans are better off and can find a way out for the soul beasts, but soul beasts are fighting to the death with humans. What's the point of turning into a human and adding to the plot? Douluo's own soul beast is an aborigine, and humans are outsiders.

Crossing the Beast also writes about a human father. When his mother was about to die, those people didn't save her and just let her die. I'll see how you write about Xiao Wu. Extremely poisonous🙂

I didn't read the main text, but read the introduction and comment section. Did the protagonist travel through time and become a deer? And the father is a human god? That's strange, why is the protagonist a deer with such a strong divine bloodline? Tang Hao was born from a human and Tang San was of human blood. If the protagonist's mother didn't transform, let's talk about it separately.

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Holy shit! The more I see the protagonist and Tang San trying to have sex, I dare not watch it. Tang San has already become a pervert

I'm about to start school, and I'll try my best to keep up with you every day. Please forgive me if I don't follow up on any day. It must be something urgent. There is no such thing as laziness. Even if there is only one person watching, I won't be a eunuch. You are the motivation for me to persist

I persisted for 12 chapters, and I felt that I was not far from Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian. 😅

Who can give me some ideas about the disappearance of the city lord, and make it a case-within-a-case like Dafeng's watchman? I originally set up Zhang Xiao as the chess piece placed in Xiaomu City, monitoring the deer swallowing technique in the forest, waiting for the day when it matures

Is the road really narrow, and travelers are crossing randomly? It's simply poisonous...

Chapters 10 and 11 are really poisonous, and I don't want to read them. The previous chapters are very good, and can be said to be the best among fics, but this chapter is really poisonous, and I don't want to read them anymore. There are comments in the article, and many people say they are poisonous. It's not me.

I read the introduction and said that I am no longer a human being. I hope I really don't change my form again and slap myself in the face.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

If you read ten lines at a glance, it's not very poisonous, and you still have to jump to read it.

There are Qian Renxue and Liu Erlong

There are many good books, this one is okay, but due to the author's attitude, bye bye.

Author, you are on a narrow road. Battle of Travelers is good to watch, but it is easy to lose fans, like me.