The Super Dimensional Hunter of the Spirit Cage

Han Yi is finally offline in stages. I hope that when he appears next time... He won't be so... So long-toothed... He should be more or less humane. This child's brain has been beaten stupid. Please give him some treatment as soon as possible. If he doesn't get treatment, he might be cursed to death by some book friends first.

The Breathing Technique of Demon Slayer is really a bad book. I stopped reading when I saw Demon Slayer. It is obvious that you can create your own breathing method in Chinese comics. Those who like spiritual cages basically like domestic culture. After all, there is a sense of scientific cultivation in the back. When you use the word Demon Slayer in this way, I think there is no breathing method in China. It's still not possible in China. If you don't care, it'll be a little disgusting. If you care, just give up. It's better to destroy the ghosts. You can apply the attached special effects of the Demon Slayer Breathing Technique, but don't write the word Demon Slayer, just breathe directly. After watching the anime "Spirit Cage", you will have a sense of recognition and liking for domestic culture. You will Forcing ghost slaying will make people think that it is not good in China. I will stop here. After all, Lingcong promotes Chinese culture, and imposing it will be of no benefit. I suggest that the word "ghost slaying" be deleted. In this case, those who don't care will not be dissatisfied, and those who do will be satisfied. I hope this is the case. Give the author a direction and don't write There are too many foreign things. After all, the spirit cage basically represents certain domestic cultures. If you impose something stronger than the domestic one, it will cause dissatisfaction among some people. I think you may have run out of inspiration, so you used Demon Slayer. However, it is really inappropriate to use Demon Slayer in this comic. I have finished saying this and have given you some suggestions. I will take my leave.

I am Shennong Chapter 8 I can't stand it anymore. I just saw the protagonist. He was not surprised and wary but wanted to start a family with the protagonist. Awesome. Even Mark in the ground team has no IQ👍🤡 I didn't read it later. I read other comments and said that there were not many normal characters. I was surprised. This book is famous purely because of the subject matter. I guess most novices can be poisoned to death.

Bai Yuekui

I'm not smart enough to read it anymore. I was confused throughout the book. Many of the dialogues were either left in half or half-stopped. The logic of the protagonist's behavior was also very strange. For example, he wanted to avenge Erica but ended up dragging ten light and shadow cultists to hunt wilderness. In addition to Charles, Is it okay to be slapped in the face? The power system is very strange. The energy cannot be restored by oneself but must be replenished by the energy of the Mana ecology. There are too many. It seemed okay at first, but now it is really depressing. I am not happy if I don't complain. I hope it won't be deleted. 😅

This is a fantasy novel. Why does the protagonist live like a dog? He doesn't dare to have a harem, he doesn't dare to quarrel with others, and he is either happy or unhappy. He is not a literary youth, and he has no IQ. The whole world of spiritual cages is also a mess written by you, so what do you want us to see?

The writing style is still relatively novice, the characterization of the characters is not good enough, and I have no understanding of the environment at that time. Do you really think that Mo Cheng is a fool to survive in that kind of cannibal world? Look at your description, it sounds like polio, and the emotional scenes of the characters are too blunt, and it doesn't reflect the dominance of the strong in the end of the world. Anyone can just come and point fingers at the protagonist and force him to rely on him. At that time, the world that respected the strong was unrealistic.

Hurry up and write this Han Yi to death. I really can't stand this guy. He is not an ordinary trap. He has no sense of self-consciousness and is always pointing fingers. If the author hadn't given the protagonist all kinds of tricks, the protagonist would have been tricked to death by Han Yi.

It's outrageous. The protagonist is not destined by the world to travel across time to save the world. Coming to the spirit cage world is equivalent to an accident. Someone can predict the arrival of the protagonist. Is there such a person in the spirit cage world? If you can predict the arrival of the protagonist across the world, why not go to heaven? Can the protagonist still believe it? Have you seriously considered it?

I was persuaded to quit as soon as I paid. The previous character design was quite good, but since I met Lazy Master, I felt that the protagonist was shocked, and there was no feeling that he was unexpected. Every emotion was written on his face. Do you think you didn't die fast enough? You are not mature at all. What else is there? When Lazy Master said that he had predicted the protagonist's future, he panicked to death. Everything was written on his face. I felt that the protagonist should not take it seriously. It is really immature.

Is that enough to be labeled as a decisive killer? That's it? That's it? The ants are riding on your face and you're doing damage, but you don't even have to fight back? Wouldn't it be enough to kill everyone who disobeys? Reasoning with a bunch of shells?

It's really hard to persuade me to quit. I saved more than ten chapters without reading them, and now you're just going to show me this? Just fight, fight, not a single word in the picture, all explanations about anti-gravity and so on, and this dialogue, always asking some unimportant questions, and then one sentence, Jiang Chengtong doesn't want to explain, so what's the point of asking questions? Just for the sake of word count, and killing those two people, it doesn't matter if they can kill instantly or not. This can be explained by letting them increase their moves, and then what? You say you can't keep these two people, and as a result, they are defeated by one move of yours. In another game, you take these two people to the spaceship, and I will block this monster below. I just want to ask you if you know what you are writing?

The old rule is, if you get more than 1,000 likes, post a nude photo of the author! You know😏

Author, I have great confidence in your work. The early stage is really good, but I really can't stand it when I see the later stage. He is obviously a time traveler, but the protagonist does not give me a strong feeling at all. Instead, he seems to be a fool. He does whatever Bai Yuokui says? I really don't have any independent thoughts at all. Oops, it's really uncomfortable. And your emotional line, I really can't understand it. If Bai Yuekui is the heroine, she has no emotions at all. It feels like a superior is ordering subordinates. Obviously Ran Bing is also the heroine, but It really looks like he and Mark are co-stars. Okay, each author has his or her own preferences. I'm just giving you suggestions. I'm withdrawing. Goodbye. But if you have other works, I will still support you 🙂🙂🙂

The useless protagonist has no ability

Chapter 27 Stay at the lighthouse? I was immediately confused. . . .