This Time, Kiana, Let Us Share Our Destiny

The word count is quite a lot, so for the sake of this, I will add one word every day. If the plot is better, I will add one more, and if the heroine is more important, I will add one more. I hope the author is not a student gangster, a procrastinator, or a street bastard.

In fact, I have always wanted to say that I hope everyone can give some opinions to the writer, such as where my description is not enough or too much, the plot setting is a bit abrupt or too loose, or if there is any plot that I want to write by hand, you can mention it in the post. After all, there is no feedback without communication, and there is no improvement without feedback. In fact, the writer has never learned to write novels... Well, yes, that's right, the writer is self-taught... Ahahahahahahaha——! ! ! ! ! ! ! I didn't expect that the writer turned out to be a genius! Ahahahahahahaha——! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahem... Well, okay, let's get down to business. If you have any comments, please give us your feedback. The writer must check it carefully, think about it over and over, and work hard to write, so as to bring to every reader the belief that they will never give up before the collapse comes. Thank you everyone!

Thank you for your support. I will work hard to write and improve the reading experience of every captain and reader! If you like my story, please vote for recommendation, thank you all!

Ah, the beginning is so long-winded. It annoyed me so much. It was not concise, and the main character looked like a lunatic no matter how I looked at it. Moreover, some things were not even set up well. I need to work harder.

Come on, author, I stopped reading because I wrote too little, but the votes will not be sold out. In fact, the reason why I am still playing Honzo is because I can't let go of those Valkyries and I want to fight for the beauty in my heart.

Strange and strange, I don't know what to say. Are there any places where the review described can actually be passed?

What can I say, adding the captain feels a bit distorted. After all, the captain does not exist in the main plot, and if the captain really exists, I can't think of any reason for the protagonist to find the heroine.