Ancient Tomb Sign-In King

The quotation marks were removed? I don't use two corners... The exceptions are Lin Buyu and Brother Xiao Lin... I'm too lazy to complain about typos... The story is actually pretty good, pretty fluent, but a little wordy...

Can the names be unified? One is Xiao Lin, the other is Lin Buyu.

It looks okay, but the small border when the character is talking feels awkward.

The plot was good, as if I was there in person, especially the third tomb. When I saw the model on the platform, I made up a lot of things in my mind, such as artifacts and supernatural beings, but I didn't expect it to be just a prophecy. There are also Xiaoqing's headless model and Epilepsy. I was shocked in my heart, and a chill ran down my spine. The bad thing is that I just think the protagonist is too nervous and careless. So many nonsense things happened along the way, and then he still felt that it was nonsense and was undefended. And there are many times when the protagonist doesn't pay attention. He runs away without looking at the road or using his brain (for example: the scene where Xiao Qing goes crazy and everything in bronze is rotten), and he still needs someone to stop him and remind him. Another point is my personal preference, so I have no sense of immersion in the protagonist. I would be very cautious, even if there is a slight possibility, I would be very vigilant, and deal with the worst-case scenario. I will not casually regard some things I see as illusions, because if I am not afraid of ten thousand, I am afraid of the worst, and my life is limited to these two (doll skills), so I will pay attention and make up my mind when I see the dimming glow stick at the end of the bronze chain. I would not care about Xiaoqing's madness. In such a dangerous place, a mad person seems to be hopeless. In order to prevent him from waking up and causing trouble for us, I will feel something is wrong in the bronze coffin, so that I abandon him, causing me to die underground.

I'm convinced. Some of you said that my use of Chinese quotation marks was too dramatic, while others said that I couldn't see clearly with Western quotation marks. Chinese ones are the best. Which one do you think I should listen to? 😒😒😒😒

Hey, there are really few comments, and the suspense section is really unpopular.

Yuan blue and white? 850,000? Yuan blue and white are not cheap! It may be suspected of hype, but the Yuan Qinghua you hear is basically tens of millions, right?

It's very well written, don't be a eunuch.

No, are you going in now?

I voted for all three recommendations, stick with it.

Keep it up, I vote for you every day

The writer may have been detained for 14 days for drunk driving and is expected to be released soon It is also possible that the PC was arrested and has not been released yet.

Can't we all call them Lin Buyu? Do you have to do two? It's best to change it, it looks awkward and tiring! Trolls, stay away from me, don't reply to me, I'm scared of you.

If you ask for leave, ask for leave, but don't be a eunuch. I finally found a tomb robbery novel that I can read. As long as I write it down, I will order it even if I am poor. I beg the author.

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, please update soon🥱🥱

There are only three Yuan blue and white pieces in the world. . . 100 Million is a good base. . .

Is this book a eunuch?

The writing gets worse and worse, the protagonist becomes more and more like a pig teammate, fighting others to death, the protagonist is either stunned or in a daze, there are too many activities in the mind, the author is flying! !

Why do I feel that the force value here is so high and there are so many big holes buried in it? How will the author make things right in the future? (=´口｀=)

Chapter 45: Kill first, then raise after reading 😁

Did you go in? Very well written

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Did he enter the palace?